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INT. CREW QUARTERS
[Open on a forest.]
THE PAST.
INT. CREW QUARTERS
[Open on a forest.]
THE PAST.
[Closeup on the eyes of a young Girl.]
A precocious 5-year-old GIRL with bright, inquisitive eyes sits cross-legged on a simulated hardwood floor. She stares out into a mystical forest enshrouded in morning fog.
A small BIRD catches the Girl’s eye as it flits through the canopy toward the sky.
[Closeup, wider than before, on the Girl’s head. Her eyes follow the flight path of the bird.]
Entranced, she turns to question an unseen individual.
GIRL: “Mommy, can we go to the park?”
MOTHER (O.S.): “Not yet, honey. I’m working on something. We’ll go in a bit.”
The girl briefly stares at a woman in her 30s who shares her dark hair and eyes. She’s seated at a desk in a lower section of their ultra-modern CREW QUARTERS. It’s an inviting living space that also serves as an office. Focused, the Mother taps at her console.
The Girl stands and quickly skips along an upper deck. The room is wrapped entirely by windows that look out onto the green trees — a scene that looks far too perfect to be real.
[The Girl walks along the upper deck past her Mother.]
[The Mother’s eyes glance from the screen to watch her daughter’s approach.]
[As the Girl continues walking, the entire room is revealed.]
The Girl reaches the steps leading into the pit and bounds down.
The Mother notices and smiles, beckoning to her lap.
The Girl hops on and stares at a series of images on screen.
One by one, video feeds of hibernating COLONISTS scroll by.
The Girl looks on in fascination at the frozen faces seen through ports in PROTECTIVE CAPSULES. They’re folks of varied age and race representing the entire spectrum of humanity.
GIRL: “They look cold.”
MOTHER: “That’s because they are.”
GIRL: “Who are they?”
MOTHER: “Survivors.”
GIRL: “From where?”
MOTHER: “Earth, honey.”
[The image of a woman colonist appears on the monitor.]
GIRL: “Like you and Daddy?”
With sadness the Mother looks at a PHOTO to the right of her monitor. It’s her with a man smiling and holding a baby.
MOTHER: “Yes… but unlike us, they were asleep when they came aboard.”
[Cut back to the monitor screen, displaying another COLONIST’S slumbering face.]
GIRL (O.S.): “And you keep them alive?”
MOTHER: “Sort of. I’m in charge of the systems that keep them alive. Someday, I’ll take you there and show you. Would you like that?”
GIRL: “Sure!”
The Girl glances at a model of COLONY ONE — a massive interstellar spacecraft — on the desk to their left. Beside
it are a number of small toy vehicles.
The Girl jumps off her mom’s lap and takes one of the toys– an AEROFOX shuttlecraft — and flies it around in her hand.
GIRL: (flying it around) “Is that scary?”
MOTHER: “Is what scary?”
GIRL: “Taking care of them.”
[Insert shot of Girl’s hand grasping the toy AeroFox.]
[The Mother gets to her knees in front of her daughter.]
MOTHER: “No more than looking after you.”
MOTHER: “Honey, we’re out here on a long trip to preserve life and make a new one.”
[As she hugs her Mother, the Girl’s eyes look at the AeroFox toy.]
MOTHER: “I care about them.”
[Tight closeup on the Girl’s eyes.]
MOTHER: “I care about you.”
MOTHER: “Every life is important.”
The Girl tries to make sense of it all. She looks down at the toy in her hand. She rotates it, pondering thoughtfully.
JUMP CUT TO: THE PRESENT.
[Tight closeup on the eyes of an adult woman.]
The toy is now a wireframe diagnostic COMPUTER GRAPHIC of the AeroFox spacecraft rotating on a monitor inside the cockpit of a real version of the same ship.
[Full shot of the woman’s head as she gazes lost in thought.]
DARCY CLARKE — a fit, 20-something version of the Girl — is wearing a trim gold and black flight suit, and is seated at the controls of the craft. She stares at the display, lost in thought.
An unseen male VOICE attempts to grab her attention.
VOICE: “Darcy, I need you to confirm the final flight plan. (Snapping his fingers) Darcy!”
Clarke is irritated by the interruption. Shaking off the memory, she refocuses, responding to a bearded and tired-eyed man in his 80s: CAPTAIN ISAAC BOVA — her adopted parent.
CLARKE (annoyed): “Jeez, Dad! We’ve been over it four * times. Flight plan confirmed.”
BOVA (ON SCREEN): “Thank you. Was that so hard?”
Clarke laughs at the Captain with a warm familiarity.
CLARKE: “Hey, instead of nagging me from the bridge, why don’t you come down to the launch bay. Do it face-to-face.”
BOVA: (ON SCREEN) “I’m sorry, peanut. It’s just…”
CLARKE: “Just what?”
BOVA: “It’s going to be a rough three days. One hell of a first mission.”
CLARKE: “You don’t think I’m ready?”
BOVA: “I didn’t say that.”
The rich voice of OMNI, the ship’s computer, fills the cabin with authority. His animated infinity symbol floats on one of Clarke’s forward monitors as he speaks.
OMNI: “Tank pressurization complete.”
CLARKE: “Copy that, Omni.” (back to Bova) “Please don’t worry about me.”
Clarke glances to a CREW MEMBER at another station.
CLARKE: (quietly) “Worry about Baxter.”
[Cut to inside the Command Center.]
BOVA: “I am. But, there’s no other choice.”
CUT TO an image of the astronaut Clarke was referring to: TANYA BAXTER — a 60-something systems engineer — is seen via a monitor on Captain Bova’s instrument-laded CONSOLE in the BRIDGE of Colony One.
Bova observes with concern as Baxter — clad in a tight hibernation suit — sleeps in her crash couch onboard the AeroFox.
BOVA: “She’s the only one who can get that shield operational in time.”
A determined Clarke is seen on a screen at the opposite end of his station. Bova turns his attention back to her.
CLARKE (ON SCREEN): “I’ll make sure that she does.”
Bova smiles in agreement, switching off Baxter. He’s wearing a formal version of Clarke’s flight suit and is seated in a elevated CAPTAIN’S CHAIR.
BOVA: “I know you will.”
The Command Center is bordered in giant, floor-to-ceiling displays that surround the bridge with real-time data and camera views of key ship interior and exterior sections.
Sensing tension, Clarke is determined to reassure Bova.
CLARKE (ON SCREEN): “In the meantime, if anyone can hold things together a while longer, it’s you. Just a few more weeks.”
Bova is clearly emotional over something big and unsaid.
BOVA: “Well… I’ve run out of chewing gum and duct tape. But, you’re right.”
Bova looks around at the surrounding ship with admiration. Crew members of varied ages and ethnicities work at nearby stations and on a lower platform.
BOVA: “The old girl is almost home.”
CLARKE (ON SCREEN): “We all are.”
Wistful, Bova refocuses on the mission at hand. He scans a geological survey of their target planet.
BOVA: “You’ll be the first people to see Proxima B up close. When you reach orbit, I need you to confirm the richest vein of copper.”
Back inside the AeroFox, the planet reference leads Clarke to another memory.
She glances at a trading card with the image of a statue from Easter Island affixed to her console.
CLARKE: “Will do. “
CLARKE: “Then we can use it to target the first mining operation. (back to business) Okay, let me and Omni get through this pre-flight before the launch window closes.”
BOVA (ON SCREEN): “Of course.”
A muffled moan causes Clarke to shoot a concerned glance toward Baxter — who is seated 120 degrees away from her.
The engineer has begun to stir, awakening groggily.
BAXTER: “Jesus…”
KYLE NIVEN, a 20-something med-tech, wearing the same uniform as Clarke, drifts to Baxter’s side.
[A floating Niven faces away from the camera, hanging in front of a strapped-in Baxter.]
Bright-eyed yet sheepish, he flashes her a friendly grin.
In the background, Clarke and Omni continue through a verbal pre-flight checklist.
NIVEN: “Doing okay, Ms. Baxter?”
BAXTER (barely comprehending): “Not sure… Did we make it?”
While using the same color scheme as the other uniforms, Baxter’s close-fitting unitard is different. It features a medical display on the chest and electrodes across the body.
NIVEN: “Not quite.”
BAXTER (coughing): “Then, why’d you thaw me out?”
NIVEN: “Couldn’t be helped.”
Niven holds a medical SCANNER, passing it over Baxter’s torso. Baxter slowly becomes aware that she’s strapped into a padded crash couch. She fights to focus her vision.
BAXTER: “And, who might you be?”
NIVEN: “Astrophysicist slash Med-Tech Kyle Niven at your service. Thirsty?”
BAXTER: “Sure. Got any coffee?”
Niven closes the scanner, placing it on his belt.
From beside it, he grabs and opens a DISC filled with GLOBES OF WATER.
He plucks one, allowing it to float as he closes the container.
NIVEN: “How about little water instead?”
Niven snags the globule, offering it to Baxter.
She opens her mouth as Niven taps the sphere toward her.
Baxter chews through the edible shell of the sphere, gulping water.
BAXTER (talking with mouth full): “If we aren’t there yet, then where the hell are we?”
Baxter: (looking around) “And why am I waking up in an AeroFox?”
NIVEN: “Relax, we made it to the Proxima system. You’ll learn the rest during the mission briefing.”
Baxter shifts angrily. It’s not the answer she’s looking for.
BAXTER: “When is that?”
NIVEN: “Soon. Don’t worry. This trip will be quick. Then we’ll get you back before the real fun begins.”
BAXTER: “Get me back..?’ You won’t even tell me where we’re going.”
Niven smiles apologetically and pats Baxter on the shoulder.
NIVEN: “I better strap in.”
Niven descends to the lower section to stow his scanner in a dispensary in the wall. Above him, having finished her pre-flight check, Clarke reinstates her conversation with Bova.
CLARKE: “Okay, Dad… The board is green.”
[Camera pans right to show Clarke]
BOVA (ON SCREEN): “Understood. Listen, before you go, we just confirmed the bad news.”
Back aboard Colony One, Bova glances toward a large screen showing the projected flight paths of his ship and Clarke’s.
BOVA: “During our final braking maneuver, Colony One will pass so close to the star, the radiation will likely disrupt communications.”
CLARKE (ON SCREEN): “That’s what the FoxSats are for. We’ll deploy all three on our first orbit.”
Inside the AeroFox, Clarke is ready to go. Bova is impressed.
BOVA : “The Clarkes would be proud of you.”
Clarke is taken off-guard by the unexpected reference.
CLARKE: “You think so?”
BOVA : “I know so. As am I.”
CLARKE: “Thank you, sir.”
Listening in the background, Niven plays with a tiny, antique GYROSCOPE — vintage 1900s — that floats in front of his face.
He snags it out of the air.
CLARKE (offscreen):“Permission to disembark, Captain?”
On Colony One, Bova nods with pride.
MOBILE OMNI – a roaming version of the ship’s computer rolls by in the background.
BOVA: “You’re cleared for launch.”
In the AeroFox, Clarke grasps the control stick.
CLARKE: “Separation on my mark.”
Baxter grabs her safety harness and mutters to herself.
BAXTER: “Why is this happening?”
She shoots Niven a glance. He gives her a thumbs up.
Pressing buttons, Clarke completes the undocking sequence.
CLARKE: “Disconnect in three, two, one.”
EXT. COLONY ONE, DOCKING AREA
[The closed door of Colony One’s ejection port is an inset circle on the strangely illuminated plane.]
The AEROFOX — a sleek, conical-shaped spacecraft — ejects from its berth on the central shaft of the larger vessel.
[The AeroFox floats free and into the pale light of space.]
[Wide shot of the AeroFox, now a tiny triangle next to the massive trunk of Colony One. The curvature of the titanic craft extends offscreen.]
[A gentle touch to the forward thrusters stop the AeroFox’s coasting.]
The vehicle fires its maneuvering thrusters and moves away.
[The camera follows the AeroFox’s progress as it strafes to the left.]
[The AeroFox continues to taxi away form the mothership. Behind, the interconnected girders and support trusses that line Colony One’s hemisphere are visible.]
EXT. SPACE, NEAR COLONY ONE
The ten-meter-long AeroFox is tiny compared to its kilometer-long mothership.
[The landing crafts jets to the left with a puff of its thrusters.]
[The minuscule profile of the AeroFox continues its way offscreen.]
[The looming curve of Colony One becomes visible, dwarfing the AeroFox.]
[Firing its maneuvering thrusters in a concentrated beam, the AeroFox tumbles a full 180 degrees.]
The COLONY ONE Interstellar Transport resembles a giant barbell comprised of two massive, shielded hemispheres connected via a long and highly-detailed spine. The AeroFox becomes a dot slowly lost in the background.
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
Clarke activates a series of commands.
She turns to the crew.
CLARKE: “Everyone get ready for the pain.”
[Close-up of Clarke’s hand on joystick.]
Baxter squeezes her eyes shut while Niven tensely clutches his gyroscope.
[Closeup of Niven’s fingers as they curl around the gyroscope.]
The craft trembles violently. The sound of engines roars through the cabin.
EXT. SPACE, NEAR AEROFOX AND COLONY ONE
A brilliant plume of exhaust lances outward from the AeroFox’s tail.
[The AeroFox’s drive shines against the shadowed form of Colony One.]
[The bulk of Colony One begins to blur around the AeroFox.]
The ship slows noticeably as Colony One pulls away — the distance between the two vehicles grows quickly.
[The AeroFox jets away, leaving Colony One to recede behind it.]
[The AeroFox’s drive is an incandescent ring pulsing with energy.]
[The bulky arrowhead shape of the AeroFox is shown as the camera pans around the craft.]
[Now nose-forward, the AeroFox coasts towards the camera.]
[Wider shot of the AeroFox’s approach. Even though the ship races against a featureless gradient, its speed is apparent.]
[Closeup of Baxter.]
[Closeup of Niven.]
[Colony One burns hard, its drives blazing. In the background, Proxima’s twin suns shine, hanging above the glittering galactic plain.]
[Colony One slides ponderously out of frame, subsuming the starscape.]
[The front hemisphere of Colony One brushes past.]
[The AeroFox speeds through space, beginning a turning maneuver.]
[The camera follows the Aerofox as it loops around, now facing the camera with its drives.]
[The camera shifts with the AeroFox as it blazes onwards.]
[Proxima Centauri looms large before the AeroFox.]
[The AeroFox slides slowly into alignment with the star’s brilliant halo.]
[The ship passes over the star until it blots the core out — a darkened pupil within a roiling iris of cosmic energy.]
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
The rumbling continues for an eternity. The crew hold on for their lives, straining against the acceleration.
Clarke’s thumb floats above red button on her joystick.
CLARKE: “Main engine cut off in three… Two… One… Mark!”
She presses it. The vibrations stop.
EXT. SPACE, NEAR AEROFOX
[Riding the splendor of the elliptical plane, the AeroFox is a silent third to Proxima A & B.]
Outside, the AeroFox’s main engines cut out.
Thrusters fire to correct its course.
The ship jets by in a graceful arc.
Back inside, a graphic indicates that the FAST-PACKS — external fuel tanks — are empty.
CLARKE: “External tank separation… Now.”
Clarke taps additional buttons on her console. The lights on her monitor blink green in confirmation.
EXT. SPACE, NEAR AEROFOX
The external tanks are discharged from the AeroFox. Small jets fire on the fast packs, pushing them away.
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
The view from Clarke’s window abruptly clears revealing the gulf of space.
She is awed by the expanse.
OMNI: “Separation complete.”
[The spent cells slowly drift past the camera.]
[The AeroFox continues its path toward the planet.]
Baxter watches as the fast packs dwindle in the distance.
BAXTER: “At Alpha Centauri less than five minutes. Already dumping garbage.”
Clarke overhears Baxter and responds facetiously.
CLARKE: “They’ll be retrieved.”
BAXTER: “I bet.”
Clarke ignores her. Her forward display indicates a long, curving orbital path. She reestablishes radio contact.
CLARKE: “Colony One, burn complete.”
CLARKE: “On course for Proxima B.”
BOVA (ON SCREEN): “Copy, AeroFox Two. As soon as Baxter is coherent, I want to brief her on the situation we’re facing.”
CLARKE (frowning): “Roger that. She’s already… awake. I’ll put on the Autobrew for her and we’ll be in touch. AeroFox out.”
EXT. SPACE
The AeroFox leaves Colony One behind. Up head, the crescent of a large, rocky planet can be seen. In the distance beyond is the flaming orb and solar prominences of a red dwarf star.
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT – EXT. SPACE
Clarke powers-down various flight systems.
Her monitor shows a graphic of the ship’s safe trajectory into orbit.
She emits a sigh of relief, then checks on her colleagues.
CLARKE: “Everyone okay?”
NIVEN: “Still in one piece.”
BAXTER: “Let’s not do that again.”
CLARKE: “Sure. Not for another…” (looks at the clock) “Thirty-two minutes.”
An irritated Baxter shifts uncomfortably. She wants answers.
BAXTER: “Guys, seriously. Why am I here?”
Clarke turns toward Baxter for a formal introduction.
CLARKE: “Engineer Baxter, I’m Commander Darcy Clarke of the Colony One Air Group. The Captain woke you because you’re the leading member of the shield team.”
BAXTER: “‘Leading member’? I designed it.”
NIVEN (Sensing Tension): “Unfortunately, it’s not working.”
BAXTER: “What the hell’s wrong with it?”
Instead of explaining, Clarke gets down to business.
CLARKE: “Omni, please reconfigure Baxter while I contact Colony One.”
OMNI: “Reconfiguring now.”
Baxter’s seat slides backward as Clarke presses buttons, reestablishing radio contact with the mothership.
CLARKE (O.S.): “Colony One, AeroFox Two. Ready for mission briefing.”
Over the speakers, Colony One’s female COMM OFFICER responds.
COMM OFFICER: (COMM VOICE) “We copy AeroFox Two. Connecting you to the Captain.”
Baxter realizes the gravity of speaking with her commanding officer in her current condition.
BAXTER (to Clarke): “Hey, where’s that AutoBrew you mentioned?”
BAXTER: “You want me talkin’ to the boss, gonna need some coffee.”
A frustrated Clarke presses a button; her seat moves away from its console.
A steadily-awakening Baxter aligns with a screen above the science station as it reveals Captain Bova.
BOVA: (ON SCREEN) “Ms. Baxter. It’s Captain Isaac Bova. It’s been fifty years. I hope I’m still as dashing as you remember…”
BAXTER: “Good to see you, sir. You don’t look a day over thirty-five.”
[EXTERIOR SHOT OF COLONY ONE]
On Colony One, Bova smiles and laughs.
BOVA: “But, hell… It’s not the years, it’s the kilometers.”
BAXTER (ON SCREEN): “Well, I wouldn’t complain much. You’ve only logged forty trillion.”
BOVA: “Yes. Something like that.”
On the AeroFox, a floating Clarke activates the ship’s FOOD STATION. She retrieves an AutoBrew and fills it with water.
BOVA (ON SCREEN): “Ms. Baxter, you should rest, so I’ll cut to the chase. There’s a problem on Proxima B and I need
your help.”
BAXTER (coughing): “Call me Tanya…”
Niven observes the briefing on his station as well.
BOVA: (ON SCREEN) “Alright, Tanya…”
On-screen, Bova taps a button. An animation replaces him.
BOVA: (VOICE ONLY) “The issue is with your shield.”
BOVA: (VOICE ONLY) “The towers we launched from Earth prior to our departure made it to the planet successfully.”
A series of automated craft travel from Earth to Proxima Centauri.
BOVA: (VOICE ONLY) “All were operational after landing.”
The crafts land at various spots on a gray-brown planet. The graphic shows a network of nodes spread out across the face of a brownish-auburn planet.
BOVA: (VOICE ONLY) “By now, they should be generating a low-frequency E-M field strong enough to protect the sunward face from the dwarf star’s radiation.”
[In the midst of listening, Baxter looks up to see the red dwarf star though the window.]
[Through Baxter’s window, the red glow of Proxima Centauri is seen.]
Bova reappears on the monitor.
BOVA: (ON SCREEN) “Unfortunately, they aren’t. The system is active, but a large number of nodes are nonfunctional.”
BAXTER: “I don’t understand. Any idea why?”
[In the background, Clarke moves toward Baxter.]
On Colony One, Bova becomes frustrated as he recounts the circumstances. Clearly, the stakes are high.
BOVA: “We haven’t a clue. We’ve tried for weeks, but are unable to fix it remotely. This is why I woke you.”
Back on the AeroFox, Clarke drifts up to Baxter’s side, holding a clear, pear-shaped container of dark liquid.
CLARKE: “Careful, that’s hot.”
Baxter takes it, leaning forward. She gulps it down as if she hadn’t had coffee in decades. Bova continues.
BOVA: (ON SCREEN) “It’s your design.”
[Back on Colony One, Bova speaks gravely.]
BOVA: “I need you to access the system and do whatever it takes to get that shield online.”
Back on Bova’s console screen, Baxter nods thoughtfully, attentive and serious. The transmission is staticky.
BOVA (O.S.): “I’ve got twenty thousand people up here counting on this mission.”
BOVA: (gravely) “No shield. No colony. No future.”
[Baxter is overwhelmed.]
BAXTER (ON SCREEN): “No shit.”
Bova nods and responds in kind. He’s in the trenches as well.
BOVA: “No shit, indeed. As a wise man once said…”
Aboard the AeroFox, Bova is fuzzy and harder to discern.
BOVA: (ON SCREEN) “‘Failure is not an option’.”
Baxter frowns. The situation hits her like a ton of bricks.
[In the background,] Clarke grabs handholds, making her way back to her seat.
BAXTER: (sitting back, determined) “I’ll pull myself together and see what I can do.”
Clarke straps back in and returns to her flight position.
BOVA: (ON SCREEN) (barely intelligible) “That’s the spirit. Look… We’re nearly out of range. This will be our last chat for a while. Good–”
The transmission cuts out.
Clarke checks the comm-system.
CLARKE: “That’s it… We lost him.”
Baxter leans back in her seat, finishing his sentence.
BAXTER: “Yeah. ‘Good luck’.”
Inside Colony One, the Captain’s spirit of warmth and encouragement is replaced with a cold sense of dread.
OMNI: “AeroFox Two has entered L-O-S.”
BOVA: “Understood. Thank you, Omni.”
Bova glances at a monitor showing the course of the AeroFox’s into orbit of Proxima B. Clarke weighs heavily on his soul.
BOVA: “Safe journey.”
EXT – Colony One continues its deceleration burn, heading toward the dull-red orb of Proxima Centauri.
EXT – Elsewhere, the AeroFox is a tiny speck as it approaches the crescent of Proxima B.
INT – Baxter ponders the situation as Niven talks to himself.
NIVEN: “Persephone.”
Clarke overhears and rolls her eyes.
Baxter is inquisitive.
BAXTER: “What did you say?”
NIVEN: “The Captain said ‘Proxima B’. The planet’s called Persephone.”
BAXTER: “Persephone? Since when?”
CLARKE: (laughing) “Since he changed it.”
NIVEN: “It sounds better and you know it!”
CLARKE: “If you say so.”
BAXTER: “Uh, guys… I couldn’t care less. We need to get to work. Omni?”
Baxter’s seat moves back to her station..
OMNI: “I’ve pulled up the relevant data.”
BAXTER: “Good. When we’re in range, link-up with the shield computer. I want to see where Colony One left off.”
Niven scans the primary Omni interface above his station.
OMNI: “Understood. However, if remote access is unsuccessful, we may be required to land.”
Baxter frowns at the thought. Niven jumps on the idea.
NIVEN: “Good thing I packed enviro-suits.”
BAXTER: “Um… No thanks. No landing for me.” (nauseated) “Barely handling this as it is.”
CLARKE: “I get it.” (turning to Niven) “We discussed the possibility, but we only land if we have to.”
NIVEN: (bummed) “Fine. We come all this way and–“
CLARKE: (interrupting) “You’re going to spend your entire life on that planet. You’ll be down there soon enough!”
Baxter has a sudden coughing fit.
Empathetic, Niven slides his chair out of flight position and unbuckles his seatbelt.
He floats to the cockpit’s lower level and pulls a med-kit from the wall.
Opening it, he grabs a HYPODERMIC dispenser.
[Baxter is wracked by another series of coughs.]
[Niven floats back up to Baxter.]
NIVEN: “This should help with the nausea. We call it ‘Popsicle Sickness’ — a side effect of hibernation.”
He administers a shot to Baxter’s neck.
BAXTER: (incredulous) “‘Popsicle’?”
NIVEN: “What we call you colonists.”
BAXTER: “Wow. Thanks a lot…”
NIVEN: (laughing) “Sorry! We needed something to differentiate you guys from us.”
Baxter surveys Niven and Clarke with a pleasant realization.
BAXTER: “Ah… So, you’re the kids of the crew who stayed awake?”
NIVEN: “Yep. Us and thirty others.”
BAXTER: “Must have been something growing up out here.”
NIVEN: “You bet it was.”
Overhearing the chat, a wave of emotions flash across Clarke’s face as if plagued by a negative memory.
Omni suddenly pipes in with urgency.
OMNI: “Detecting an X-Class solar flare. It will arrive in ten minutes.”
A graphic on Clarke’s console indicates an approaching storm of deadly radiation.
Clarke briefly laughs and turns in Niven’s direction.
CLARKE: “Ha! Told ya’. You owe me. One month of your fruit allocation. And I’m talkin’ the real stuff… Not synthesized.” (gesturing) “Pay up.”
Niven pops the hypo onto his belt in feigned anger.
NIVEN: “Like I brought blueberries with me!”
BAXTER: “What are you guys talking about?”
CLARKE: “‘Mister Optimist’ here bet me that we could make it to the planet without a flare erupting. He lost.”
A defeated Niven drifts back to his seat.
BAXTER: “That’s nice, but what are we gonna do about it?”
CLARKE: “What do you mean?”
BAXTER: (irritated) “This ship is a lander. It doesn’t have the radiation shielding for a long-duration flight.”
NIVEN: “True. But, as always, Darcy has a plan.”
CLARKE: “Indeed, I do. Strap in.”
[Baxter steels herself.]
EXT. PERSEPHONE, ORBIT
[The camera follows the AeroFox.]
[The AeroFox passes in front of the red dwarf.]
[The AeroFox continues to screen right.]
In the distance, a bright SOLAR FLARE blasts toward the AeroFox!
[Clarke prepare to fire the main engine.]
[Close-up on Clarke’s right hand as she presses the button to engage.]
The AeroFox fires its main engine again.
In order to reverse orbit, as well as slowdown, the ship decelerates while thrusting sideways. It’s a hard burn — nearly as hard as the deceleration burn from Colony One.
The blue glow diminishes as the ship dives toward Proxima B.
In the distance, the red dwarf disappears behind the planet.
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
The cockpit goes dark with the exception of internal lights.
[Close-up on Niven.]
CLARKE: “We’ll stay in the planet’s shadow until it passes.”
BAXTER: “Nice.”
Clarke checks her instruments and shudders uncomfortably.
CLARKE: “God…”
NIVEN: “What?”
CLARKE: “I’ve never seen anything so black.”
[The AeroFox continues its orbit in the darkness.]
[Close on the AeroFox.]
EXT – The dark side of Persephone is like a huge black hole in space, obscuring the bright band of the Milky Way beyond.
EXT. AEROFOX
[The AeroFox moves toward camera.]
Thrusters fire. In the distance, the twin stars of Alpha Centauri A and B rotate into view opposite the ebony planet.
[Opposite thrusters on the AeroFox stop the turn.]
[The ship passes under camera.]
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
Clarke moves her controller to rotate the ship. The view shifts.
CLARKE: “And, look at that.”
Clarke notices flashing on the edge of the planet.
NIVEN: “Yeah. Lightning. Perpetual storms caused by the temperature variance on the day-night line.”
Baxter bristles at an undisclosed memory.
BAXTER: “That’s nothing compared to what it was like when we left Earth.”
[Niven and Clarke exchange a look as they observe the maelstrom below.]
EXT. PERSEPHONE, ORBIT – LATER
The red-orange light of Proxima Centauri grows on the horizon as the AeroFox leaves the night side of the planet. The song “It Keeps You Running” by the Doobie Brothers can be heard playing over the orbital vista.
OMNI (V.O.): “All clear. Radiation normal.”
The AeroFox fires thrusters and flips into a new orientation.
[Thrusters on the AeroFox fire to stop the rotation.]
[The AeroFox moves toward camera.]
[The AeroFox continues under camera.]
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
The cabin — now filled with funky bass tones — is illuminated by the auburn light of Proxima Centauri.
An irritable Baxter reviews computer files on the shield problem.
[Baxter taps on the keyboard as graphics and data move on her monitors.]
CLARKE: “When I said you could play music, I didn’t mean classical. Where do you even find this stuff?”
Niven floats at the SCIENCE STATION in the lower section of the craft. He stares into the viewing hood of a telescope.
NIVEN: “In the archives. Some of us actually study Earth history.”
NIVEN: “The good news is… I made a special playlist just for this mission. You’re gonna love it!”
Baxter is staying out of it; Clarke rolls her eyes.
CLARKE: “Great.”
NIVEN: (looking up) “Ms. Baxter, wanna see something?”
BAXTER: “Down there?”
NIVEN: “I promise it’s worth it.”
Baxter’s chair lowers and she unbuckles reluctantly.
As she drifts down, she grabs a nearby handle before knocking into the wall.
Niven reaches up and pulls her to his side.
Baxter grabs the viewing hood and squints into it. Niven observes.
NIVEN: “I’ve wanted to view them up close since I was a kid.”
[He crosses to the left side of the science station.]
CLARKE: “What are you talking about?!”
An excited Niven smiles and flicks a couple of switches. The sunward-face of Persephone pops up on screens throughout the craft.
NIVEN: “The geoglyphs.”
[The same image appears’s on Clarke’s monitor.]
The brownish-gray planet is crisscrossed with a series of dark, straight lines. They stand out against the arid landscape. Some areas are less prominent than others.
CLARKE: “Ugh…”
NIVEN: “The geoglyphs.”
CLARKE: “…Those again.”
Niven ignores her, straining at the image.
NIVEN: “They look different. Shriveled up.”
Baxter is amazed, looking back and forth between Niven and the images of the geoglyph.
BAXTER: “Wow. You really have studied them.”
NIVEN: “Enough to know they’ve changed since the old probe images. I want to know why.”
CLARKE: (scoffing) “As long as there’s enough of that stuff for us to build a civilization, who cares?”
Niven points at the screen angrily.
NIVEN: “We should! Jesus, Darcy. Can we do a little science before you go digging up the place?”
CLARKE: (facetious) “Sure! Snap a few geo-scans for me? That’s science, right?”
NIVEN: “Those patterns are more than just mineral deposits!”
BAXTER: “And, what do you think they are?”
[Niven floats up toward the large monitor as he turns his head to address Baxter.]
NIVEN: “Signs of extraterrestrial life.”
Baxter backs away from the console.
BAXTER: “Come on…”
Niven toggles the telescope instruments, zooming in.
NIVEN: “Seriously! They’re perfect. There for eons. Next to huge volcanoes. And, somehow completely free of ash! What could cause that?”
A panel on the wall lights up as Omni joins the discussion.
OMNI: “The initial landers indicated they were statically-charged mineral deposits.”
OMNI: “Hence, the lack of dust.”
CLARKE: “Exactly. Thank you, Omni.”
BAXTER: “Hmmm… It is a tidally-locked exo-planet orbiting a dwarf star. Who knows how gravitational forces might shape its surface?”
NIVEN: (increasingly livid) “You can’t tell me you don’t see massive alien art down there!”
BAXTER: “Who made it? There’s nothing alive on Proxima B, except the algae we seeded.”
[Baxter uses the bars on the station to cross to her seat.]
BAXTER: “No one’s ever lived there.”
NIVEN: (reaching) “I didn’t say anyone lived there.”
NIVEN: “Maybe someone… stopped by and… I don’t know… Just did it.”
An amused Baxter returns to her seat.
BAXTER: “Sure. Makes total sense.”
CLARKE: “Yeah, Kyle. It was aliens.”
A disappointed Niven gives up. He taps a button to shut off the telescope feed, and heads back to his seat.
[Niven floats toward his seat.]
EXT. PERSEPHONE, ORBIT
[The AeroFox moves to screen left.]
[The AeroFox passes in front of the Milky Way.]
The AeroFox cruises above the geoglyphs. The network of giant rocky veins loosely resembles geometrically-shaped neurons.
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
Baxter coordinates with Clarke as she activates systems.
BAXTER: “Hold this orbit.”
BAXTER: “Omni, establish a link with the primary shield node.”
A schematic of the node rotates on-screen.
OMNI: “Link established. Accessing data.”
Baxter zooms in. The code shows numerous random errors.
BAXTER: “What the hell?”
BAXTER: “The subroutines that regulate power flow are disabled.”
CLARKE: “How is that possible?”
BAXTER: “Back-ups are offline as well.”
BAXTER: “I have to reinstall the O-S.”
OMNI: “While you do that, I will analyze–“
Omni suddenly rages with a bizarre outburst.
OMNI: “No… This is not… NO!”
NIVEN: “Omni! What’s wrong?”
OMNI: “Frag… Fragmentation!”
The lights of the Omni interface begin flashing randomly.
Instrumentation follows suit — including loud alert tones. The crew watch in stunned fascination.
[Cut to Clarke’s face.]
[Cut to Niven as he struggles to understand what is happening.]
Then, the main cabin illumination dims and is replaced with red emergency lights.
[Baxter reacts to the emergency lights.]
NIVEN: “Omni? Omni, respond!”
Silence.
[The AeroFox moves to the left of frame.]
Outside the AeroFox’s exterior lights flash in Distress Mode.
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
Inside the cabin, with Omni out of order, Niven pulls a manual release and pushes from his seat.
[Close shot of Niven pulling back the manual release lever on his seat.]
[Niven’s chair drops back toward the ship’s rear.]
[Now in position, Niven pushes from his seat in the low gravity.]
He drifts to the science station.
The computer remains silent.
[Niven examines the science station for a clue as to Omni’s malfunction.]
[Baxter turns her head in Niven’s direction.]
BAXTER: “What’s going on?!”
NIVEN: “He’s offline.”
Without warning, the ship bucks wildly!
Niven attempts to grab a handhold and fails.
Above him, Clarke flies into action, checking her glitch-ridden instrumentation.
CLARKE: “What the hell?”
[As the cabin shakes, Baxter holds on for dear life.]
CLARKE (O.S.): “Thrusters firing!”
Unable to grab a handle, Niven drifts uncontrollably and slams into the side of the ship’s lavatory.
[Niven’s body connects with a painful thump.]
EXT –
[The AeroFox is in high orbit above the planet.]
[Thrusters randomly fire, tossing the ship around.]
The thrusters fire wildly sending the ship into a spin.
INT –
Niven is tossed away from the bulkhead and rammed into the central column!
[Niven’s chest connects with the central column.]
[His momentum flips him around the pole’s axis, sending Niven head over heels.]
[Niven hits the wall along the food dispensary area.]
His painful cry catches Baxter’s attention. She moves to help.
BAXTER: “Kyle!”
[Clarke stills tries desperately to control the ship.]
CLARKE: “Stay in your seat!”
EXT. AEROFOX
The jets continue to discharge randomly.
The ship rolls.
[As thrusters fire arbitrarily, the ship rolls from camera.]
[The AeroFox continues to tumble.]
[The ship completes a revolution and continues to spin planetside.]
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
Clarke wrenches on the controls.
CLARKE: “I can’t null this out…”
Below, Niven clutches his abdomen.
[Close on Baxter. She is worried for Niven’s predicament, but slightly relieved to see he has secured himself against the bulkhead.]
Clarke scans her controls and thinks of a possible solution.
CLARKE: “I’m firing the main engine! Only way to override the O-M-S!”
Fighting the spin, Clarke activates the propulsion system.
EXT. AEROFOX
The main engine flares to life. The thrusters cease firing.
The ship shoots forward at an odd angle toward the planet!
[Camera pans with the AeroFox as it continues to dive.]
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
Clarke slowly gains ground against the malfunction.
[Beneath her, Niven rides it out in pain.]
EXT. PERSEPHONE, ORBIT
The AeroFox’s flight pattern smooths out.
[The ship’s main thrusters stop firing.]
Yet, its orbit has clearly shifted as the engines shut down.
INT. COCKPIT
Clarke checks the ship’s trajectory and blows a quick sigh of relief. Niven drifts below in pain.
Baxter cranes to see him.
BAXTER: “You okay?”
NIVEN: “Wow. That hurt…” (up at Baxter) “But, yeah… I’m good.”
Niven slowly makes his way back to his seat.
[Niven grabs a handhold on the central column near his chair.]
[Niven settles into his chair and straps in.]
NIVEN: “I’ll try a hard reboot.”
CLARKE: “Do it.”
Clarke presses buttons on her console.
Niven’s chair rise back to his station.
Niven presses buttons on his console.
The cabin lights and instrumentation are restored to their original configuration.
BAXTER: “Looks like it worked.”
Back inside, Niven stares at the blank science station.
NIVEN: “Omni… Where are you, pal?”
A klaxon emanates from Clarke’s console breaking the silence.
CLARKE: “Shit! We lost main engines.”
CLARKE: “Our orbit. It’s decaying fast.”
NIVEN: “The burn sent us in the wrong direction!”
The flashing red of the emergency lights triggers an abrupt, traumatic memory in Clarke. She freezes at her controls as Niven yells in the background. His voice and the room fade.
[Flashback. Colony One hallway outside Bridge. Close on elevator door opening.]
Close on young Clarke.
JUMP CUT TO:
FLASHBACK: The CORRIDOR is bustling with running officers as an emergency unfolds. YOUNG DARCY (the Girl) is being led by her Mother, DENISE CLARKE, into Colony One’s Bridge.
The mother and daughter stop and take in the sight.
The mother and daughter stop and take in the sight.
Everything is illuminated in red-alert lighting — exactly like the AeroFox. The Bridge buzzes with activity. Technicians bark at each other. Something is seriously wrong!
At the far end of the room, Captain Bova — 20 years younger and clean-shaven — sits at his console. He waves them forward.
MOTHER: “Got here as fast as I could. I was taking Darcy to school when the alert sounded. We diverted here.”
Behind Bova, a ship schematic flashes red in several critical areas.
Young Darcy is in awe.
The Captain nods at the Girl.
BOVA: “Welcome to Control, young lady. I wish it was under better circumstances.”
With maturity, Young Darcy reaches up and shakes the Captain’s hand. Briefly redirected from the emergency, he smiles warmly and takes it.
Denise scans the display.
[Insert of Colony One schematic depicting damage to tank two and meteor trajectory.]
DENISE: “Looks like a meteor punctured the
aft barrier and struck Tank Two.”
BOVA: “Yes. It’s venting into space.”
[Insert live video feed of damaged tank.]
BOVA [OS]: “We’ve already lost three percent of our cyro-reserves.”
The intense situation leads to a heated exchange.
DENISE: “That’s all we’ve got! I’m barely keeping the hibernation units running as it is!”
DENISE (with misplaced anger): “Dammit, I told you this might happen when the back-up units were damaged in the Oort Cloud!”
BOVA: “I know that. It’s not like we could have circled back to get more!”
BOVA (gravely): “At this point, no matter what we do, we’re going to lose ten thousand colonists.”
DENISE: “Gonna lose a helluva lot more…”
[On Young Darcy, looking up at her mother.]
DENISE (OS): “…if we don’t get out there and fix it!”
BOVA: “We’re prepping to send your team.”
DENISE: “Good. I’ll get suited up.”
BOVA: “No. Lead them from here.”
DENISE: “Captain…”
[Bova gestures to Young Darcy with an open palm.]
BOVA: “Denise.”
[Denise looks down at her daughter, pensively.]
DENISE: “I know.”
DENISE (determined): “It’s my job.”
Bova sighs and nods, looking sympathetically toward Young Darcy.
The mother kneels, touching the girl’s shoulders.
DENISE: “Honey, I have to go. I need you to stay with Captain Bova.”
Bova smiles warmly at Young Darcy.
BOVA: “Yes. You can help me run things.”
YOUNG DARCY (to her mother): “Where are you going?”
DENISE: “Outside, honey.”
Niven’s voice is suddenly juxtaposed over the scene.
NIVEN (O.S.): “The burn sent us in the wrong direction. We have to compensate!”.
JUMP CUT BACK:
Back inside the AeroFox, a graphic shows a path that intersects with the surface. They are going to crash!
NIVEN: “You have to compensate!”
Niven knows something is wrong with Clarke. He yells, snapping Clarke out of her childhood memory.
NIVEN: “Darcy!”
Clarke shakes her head to clear her mind and returns to the present. She scans her controls.
CLARKE: “Uh… Thrusters are offline.”
NIVEN: “You should engage main engines.”
NIVEN: (pointing to his screen) “Use our trajectory. Bounce us off the atmosphere!”
CLARKE: “That’s insane!”
NIVEN: “You have a better idea?!”
Clarke realizes it’s the only way. She makes the call, and presses the main engine control. Nothing happens.
CLARKE: “Main engine just went offline.”
BAXTER: “What the hell is going on?”
Clarke plays with the stick. The sound of jets reverberates.
CLARKE: “Wait, I just got limited control.”
NIVEN: “Then we can get back into orbit.”
Clarke looks around, then checks her instruments.
CLARKE: “No. We’ve used too much fuel.”
Baxter knows where this is heading. She mutters to herself.
BAXTER: “Don’t say it. Please don’t say it.”
CLARKE: “No choice! Aligning for descent.”
EXT. PERSEPHONE, ORBIT
The maneuvering jets fire on the AeroFox.
The craft flips so its rear faces the surface as it continues its arcing dive.
[The camera lowers with the AeroFox as it continues its summersault.]
[The AeroFox’s spin brings it close to the camera, showing the thrusters close for imminent entry.]
[The camera pans down as the AeroFox descends parallel to the band of the Milky Way.]
[The camera finishes its pan, revealing the dusk-red curve of the planet.]
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
Clarke is reluctant but driven as she monitors systems.
CLARKE: “We hit atmosphere in one minute.”
Niven scans for a landing site.
NIVEN: “Angle for the dark side.”
CLARKE: “Why?!”
NIVEN: “Flares! With the shield offline, it’s the only was to stay out of the radiation.”
CLARKE: “Fine! Find us a spot to set down.”
NIVEN: “I’m looking.”
As Clarke tweaks the controls to alter course, Baxter can do nothing aside from holding on and waiting for the inevitable.
EXT. PERSEPHONE, ORBIT
[The base of the AeroFox begins to glow a molten orange.]
The AeroFox slams into the upper atmosphere, leaving the dayside of the planet behind.
The craft creates a trail of superheated gas in its wake as Proxima Centauri sinks on the horizon, creating a crimson sunset.
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
The crew is buffeted as the glow of entry enters the windows. A loud roar fills the cabin.
[A shaken Baxter clutches at her restraints.]
Niven observes a wireframe landscape on his monitor, calling out over the cacophony.
[Blurred by the ship’s vibration, Niven’s NAV readout shows their projected landing zone.]
NIVEN: “Stay on this heading!”
Clarke tracks a trajectory on her console.
CLARKE: “Got it! She’s right on the line.”
EXT. PERSEPHONE, ATMOSPHERE – SUNSET
The AeroFox slows as the glow of the heat shield diminishes.
[The camera tightens on the descending ship.]
Up ahead, an ominous wall of mountains line the horizon. Just beyond them, lightning flashes as the terminator storm rages.
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
The turbulence smooths out.
Screens indicate they’re almost on the ground.
Clarke is back on her game, guiding the craft.
EXT. PERSEPHONE, ATMOSPHERE – SUNSET
The ship arcs just above the mountains and enters the electric maelstrom.
It disappears into the black clouds.
[Tongues of lightning illuminate the clouds surrounding the AeroFox.]
[The AeroFox passes under the cloud layer, revealing the shadowed mountains below.]
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
Lightning flashes outside the windows.
The ship is slammed even harder than during atmospheric entry.
EXT – PERSEPHONE ATMOSPHERE
[The AeroFox tumbles into frame.]
Rockets along the upper section of the AeroFox fire, slowing the craft even further. Simultaneously, the onslaught of the storm increases.
[The glow of the descending AeroFox’s engine lights the lowest layer of clouds.]
[The AeroFox breaches the clouds, dropping towards the mountains.]
[The AeroFox’s thrusters struggle against gravity.]
[Wider shot of the AeroFox dropping, its engines still blazing against the night.]
A huge bolt of lightning strikes the ship!
[Tighter shot of the Aerofox as lightning arcs across its form.]
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
[White-hot lightning pierces the interior of the AeroFox.]
Arcs of blue fire jump around the cabin.
The startled crew pull away from their instruments to avoid being electrocuted!
As the sparks fade, internal power fails at the same time. Wisps of smoke drift where the lightning impacted the most.
Wisps of smoke drift where the lightning impacted the most.
EXT. PERSEPHONE, MOUNTAINS – NIGHT
[The sparks die on the AeroFox’s exterior.]
The retros momentarily cease firing.
[The Aerofox accelerates down towards jagged mountain peaks!]
The ship drops rapidly and skirts the edge of a cliff.
[The AeroFox skids down the cliff as lightning flashes in the background.]
A loud scraping is heard as the lower section is damaged.
{The camera is fixed on the Aerofox as it falls in front of cracked rock walls.]
Metallic debris is left behind as the retros suddenly kick back in.
The craft exits the storm and straightens its course!
A dry valley is up ahead.
[The AeroFox rockets upward, arcing over the valley.]
[The AeroFox blasts out of frame.]
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
Numerous warning sounds fill the space. A fire breaks out where the lightning struck.
Baxter looks down in horror as smoke fills the cabin.
BAXTER: “Hey! We have a fire!”
CLARKE: “Stay put! We’re almost down!”
The screens indicate they are nearing touchdown. Clarke hits a series of buttons.
CLARKE: “Deploying gear!”
[Niven grimaces as the flames grow behind him.]
EXT. PERSEPHONE, LANDING SITE – NIGHT
[Wobbling slightly, the AeroFox positions itself over the landing site.]
Panels open on the base of the AeroFox. Sturdy landing struts emerge and lock in place.
[The camera pans with the AeroFox’s final approach, showing Persephone’s mottled texture lit by thruster bloom.]
The ship’s rockets blast away dust as it finally settles on the cracked, alien surface.
[The AeroFox is a tiny glowing dot amidst the storming alien landscape.]
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
Clarke disconnects her restraints.
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
Clarke disconnects her restraints.
With the ease of a superhero, she jumps out her seat.
[She observes the situation acting quickly.]
[She jumps down.]
[Clarke lands on the floor.]
She snatches a fire extinguisher from the wall.
[Clarke begins hosing down the fire, spraying foam across the flames.]
[She finishes off the fire.]
Baxter and Niven look on as she brandishes it like a weapon, dousing the flames.
Clarke makes her way to the science station and hits a switch to shut down the alarms. Everyone is stunned by the sequence of events.
A bizarre silence fills the cabin, occasionally interrupted by the sound of howling wind and distant thunder. Clarke leans back against the console and closes her eyes for a moment to simply relax and listen.
She reopens them and looks up at Niven. Lightning flashes in the window above him.
CLARKE: “Niven, can you access to flight systems?”
Niven scans his station, and throws up his hands.
NIVEN: “Barely.”
CLARKE: “Shut her down.”
He flicks a sequence of switches. The whine of engine pumps can be heard powering down.
NIVEN: “Engines off. Drive safe.”
The crew can finally take a minute to breathe. Baxter slowly stirs. She has difficulty raising her arms.
BAXTER: “Feels like someone parked a truck on me.”
NIVEN: (clutching his stomach) “It’s… It’s the gravity. About thirty percent more than Earth.”
CLARKE: “You’re tough, Baxter. You can handle it.”
BAXTER: “Easier said than done. Maybe if I’d had time to train for this crap!”
An angry Clarke attempts to run a diagnostic of the AeroFox.
CLARKE: “I can guarantee none of us want to be here either.”
Through his fog of pain, Niven pipes up with muted humor.
NIVEN: “Well, actually… I don’t mind–“
CLARKE: “Dude. Just shut up and get down here. Both of you.”
A frustrated Baxter and a shaken Niven trigger their manual releases. Their chairs disengage and drop to the lower level.
EXT – The AeroFox has settled on a windy plain. Lightning flashes in the distance.
INT –
[Baxter releases the straps holding her in her seat.]
Clarke stands tall in the high gravity. Baxter observes with contempt. She rises, placing shaky feet on the floor.
BAXTER: “Am I crazy, or did we hit something on the way down?”
NIVEN: “You’re not crazy.”
CLARKE: “We need to do a damage assessment.”
NIVEN: “Hard without a computer.”
Niven remains in his seat, clearly in severe pain. His jovial mood is gone.
Omni’s voice catches the crew off guard.
OMNI: “The computer is here… At least part of me is.”
Clarke walks to the computer interface. She accesses it.
CLARKE: “What happened?”
OMNI: “Whatever caused the data corruption in the shield jumped to my systems.”
BAXTER: “And then you missed all the fun.”
OMNI: “A cascading discharge must have affected navigation.”
OMNI: “I apologize for any inconvenience.”
Leaning against the bulkhead, Baxter laughs at the absurdity.
CLARKE: “What did you mean by ‘part of you’?”
ONMI: “I can speak and share information. However, my systems are unreliable. Regardless, I’ll attempt to run a diagnostic.”
CLARKE: “Good. Baxter and I will go outside to check the damage.”
BAXTER (looking at Niven): “Before anyone goes E-V-A, maybe we should–“
CLARKE: (interrupting) “Come on… Less talk. More action. Let’s just get on with it!”
Baxter’s patience with the young commander is wearing thin.
BAXTER: “Watch it, kiddo. You don’t even know what I was going to say.”
CLARKE: “Fine. Sorry.”
BAXTER:(to Niven) “I was going to suggest giving you a once-over with the auto-doc.”
Niven rolls to his side, attempting to sit up straight.
Clarke notices the damaged medical station. A black scar cuts across its face.
She walks over to check it out.
CLARKE: “Not gonna happen.”
NIVEN: “No worries. I’ll be fine.”
BAXTER: “You sure?”
NIVEN: (waving her off) “Yeah, yeah. Focus on the ship.”
Baxter can tell he’s lying, but decides to let it go.
[Niven grimaces in pain.]
OMNI: “I’ve just rerouted systems to backup power.”
OMNI: “However, I’m unable to do the diagnostic. You have to go outside.”
Clarke’s had enough. Time to go.
CLARKE: “Omni, give me access to the envirosuits.”
Clarke and Baxter’s chairs quickly rise.
BAXTER: “You’re really dragging me out there?”
Clarke turns to Baxter and nods.
She then quickly accesses a clear panel in the floor that contains a sleek spacesuit.
EXT. AEROFOX, LANDING SIGHT – NIGHT
[They have landed. The camera pans around the wild and primal world of Proxima B.]
[Pan from Milky Way past volcano to twin stars.]
A large body of partially frozen water spans the horizon in the distance.
Small patches of ice can be seen near the landing gear of the AeroFox.
On the side of the vehicle, a door pops open and the ship’s AIRLOCK deploys like an accordion.
[Airlock fully deploys.]
[Light turns on beneath the airlock.]
[The ladder deploys.]
The hatch opens.
The two women wear O2 BACKPACKS and HEADGEAR with clear faceplates.
[Unsteadily, Clarke swings her feet onto the ladder.]
[She moves with apprehension.]
[She eyes the ground warily. Clarke, who was born in space, has never stepped on a planet before.]
[Clarke’s POV through the HUD of her face mask.]
Clarke climbs down first and gives a tentative look around the area.
Baxter watches from above inside the vestibule.
Clarke suddenly begins to hesitate, struck by another memory.
JUMP CUT TO:
FLASHBACK: On the screen at Captain Bova’s station, two space- suited figures exit an airlock.
Young Darcy sits on his lap watching her parents make their way outside. Bova realizes the level of danger and wants to divert the child’s attention. He points toward a Mobile Omni unit rolling by.
BOVA: “Hey, peanut… Now might be a good time to go play a game with Omni.”
The robot stops and greets Young Darcy.
MOBILE OMNI: “Yes. Hello, Ms. Clarke. I believe you enjoy flight simulations?”
YOUNG DARCY: “No! I wanna see this!”
Bova is amazed and a little taken aback by her strength.
BOVA: “Okay. You’re the boss.”
On screen, the couple board a small SKIFF — a mobile, two person rocket pod — and jet toward the site of the disaster.
Baxter watches impatiently. She prods the stalled astronaut.
BAXTER: “Hey, I thought we were in a hurry.”
[An overhead view from Baxter’s POV show’s Clarke clinging to the ladder.]
Irritated, Clarke continues down the ladder.
She jumps the final meter, landing hard on the surface.
She clicks on a flashlight.
[Baxter hauls herself over the bar and begins her climb down.]
[Baxter, still weary from a cryo-sleep of 50 years, moves with difficulty in the intense gravity.]
Climbing out behind her, Baxter slips and falls the final few rungs.
[She lands roughly on the planet’s surface.]
With sympathy, Clarke helps her up.
BAXTER: “One small step for woman, huh?”
CLARKE: “Yeah. Pretty much.”
Clarke checks the FLASHSCANNER mapping device on her wrist.
CLARKE: “Zero point sixty-seven degrees north latitude, twenty-three point forty-seven degrees east longitude.”
BAXTER: “Yeah. Our first planet-fall.”
Baxter leans on Clarke as they hike away from the AeroFox.
In the far distance, a volcano spews lava and smoke into the black sky. The wind blows snow flurries around them in the light of the double stars.
CLARKE: “What’s this stuff in the air?”
BAXTER: “I have no idea. Snow, maybe?”
Clarke kneels and takes a handful of ice and dust in her glove.
[Close shot of dust running through Clarke’s fingers.]
Baxter understands the magnitude of the moment.
BAXTER: “Is this how you envisioned it?”
CLARKE: “I… I didn’t know what to expect.”
Baxter observes with a motherly sense of empathy.
CLARKE: “I never stood on a planet before.”
Baxter reaches to touch Clarke’s shoulder, but pulls back.
BAXTER: “I get it. I never expected to stand on another one.”
Clarke regains composure, shakes off her emotions and stands.
Baxter looks up at the night sky with curiosity.
BAXTER: “Speaking of Earth, where’s the Sun?”
CLARKE: “What? You mean Sol?”
Clarke scans the sky for a moment. She spots the brightest star in the Milky Way and points toward it confidently.
CLARKE: “It’s right there.”
Baxter follows Clarke’s arm to see Earth’s Sun.
CLARKE: “Do you miss it?”
BAXTER: “That would require something worth missing, babe.”
The two women lock eyes. Clarke turns toward the AeroFox.
CLARKE: “Let’s check out the damage.”
He deploys it into its functioning position.
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
Niven limps around the cabin. After grabbing a sphere of water, he retrieves the medical scanner he used on Baxter from his belt.
NIVEN: “Omni, full recline please.”
OMNI: “Absolutely.”
[Niven’s chair comes down and converts to lounge mode.]
Niven’s chair extends to a flatter position. He slumps hard.
OMNI: “Are you alright?”
[Niven opens the med-kit and grabs the scanner.]
NIVEN: “We’re about to find out, buddy…”
[Niven puts the case on the floor and leans back.]
NIVEN: “Soon as I’m done, we fix you.”
He deploys the scanner and passes it over his abdomen.
After a beat, he reviews the findings via an image of his body. Red lights flash throughout his midsection.
OMNI: “Kyle, this isn’t good…”
[New frame of full monitor.]
OMNI: “…You need serious medical attention.”
Niven closes the scanner and leans back to ponder his fate.
EXT. AEROFOX, ENGINE SECTION – NIGHT
Baxter and Clarke move to survey the area of the ship that impacted the cliff. Baxter runs her hand over the hull.
BAXTER: “It’s barely even scratched.”
CLARKE: “It’s all internal.”
CLARKE: “According to this scanner, the fuel lines, the valves…”
Clarke: “…hell, the whole propulsion system — is jacked due to that scratch.”
Baxter tries to remove a dented maintenance access panel on the side of an aft attitude thruster block.
Unable to make it budge, she staggers backward and gestures to Clarke.
BAXTER: “Your turn, Wonder Woman.”
Clarke stalks forward.
She grabs the panel, opening it easily. Smoke and sparks fly from the aperture.
Baxter moves in and surveys the damage. Baxter enables her O2 mask’s augmented reality display. Maintenance and diagnostic information appears on top of the wreckage.
BAXTER: (pointing) “It looks like a busted L-R-U.”
CLARKE: “Yeah. I’m reading the same thing.”
Clarke reaches for the damaged unit. Baxter observes her.
BAXTER: “You must’ve kicked ass training for this place.”
CLARKE: “Yeah. I worked out every day in the centrifuge to prep for the high gravity.”
CLARKE: “The ship even simulated red dwarf’s sunlight.”
BAXTER: “What about here on the dark side?”
CLARKE: “Why? There was no reason to.”
Lightning catches her eye in the distance. She pulls the component and turns.
She pulls the component and turns. Baxter bristles.
BAXTER: “Maybe you should have. If we can’t get that shield working, we’re going to be stuck over here.”
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
The women enter the cockpit and seal the hatch.
Niven waves weakly to the two women with his right hand. He holds the medical scanner in his left. They both remove their masks.
NIVEN: “How are the engines?”
CLARKE: (holding up the LRU) “We need to replace this unit.”
The 3D-animated Omni graphic has mostly returned to normal.
OMNI: “I’ll print you a new one.”
CLARKE: “Good. Let me know when it’s done.”
Clarke drops the LRU in a refuse bin and checks the science station. Baxter is concerned about Niven. She sulks to him.
NIVEN: “What was it like?”
BAXTER: “Intense. You’ll see.”
OMNI: “Engineer, you should rest. You are still recovering from hibernation.”
She shares a tired smile, pats Niven on the shoulder and plops down.
[Baxter leans back with her helmet in her lap.]
CLARKE: “After that impact, I’m going to recalibrate the guidance system.”
Clarke hops in her seat and rises up to the pilot’s position.
[Clarke heaves herself into the station, the chair’s hydraulics shifting to hold her weight.]
[Clarke’s seat clicks into a ninety degree cant, making her level with the pilot’s console.]
Clarke hops in her seat and rises up to the pilot’s position.
Niven calls for their attention.
NIVEN: “Cool. In the meantime, I have good news, bad news, and weird news.”
Clarke chimes in while activating her console.
CLARKE: “What’s the ‘good’?”
BAXTER: “Yeah, we could use some good news.”
NIVEN: “I fixed Omni. Rebooted his O-S from a back-up. I also created a patch that should block out further E-M-Ps.”
Baxter turns her head toward the reclined Niven.
BAXTER: “I wonder if we could do something similar with the shield nodes?”
“It would be nice to know what’s causing the problem first.”
OMNI: “The nearest node is Two-Twelve. Sixty-one kilometers away.”
Niven attempts to sit up. He’s in increasing pain.
NIVEN: “That brings me to the ‘weird news’.”
OMNI: “We’ve isolated the E-M remnant in my system and the shield nodes.”
NIVEN: “The odd part is that it seems to have come from outside the shield system.”
BAXTER: “Outside? How is that even possible?”
CLARKE: “Exactly. There’s no one else here.”
NIVEN: “That’s what we want to know.”
BAXTER: “Hold up… What’s the bad news?”
NIVEN: (pained) “I might not be around long enough to help you guys figure it all out.”
Niven leans back, offering the medical scanner to Baxter.
NIVEN: “My liver. It was ruptured when I was slammed into the bulkhead.”
Baxter grimaces as she reviews the digital diagnosis.
Clarke is horrified at the news.
CLARKE: “Come on… You couldn’t have bounced around that hard!”
Niven shrugs with muted defeat as Omni responds to Clarke.
OMNI: “I believe it’s a genetic defect caused by long-term exposure to cosmic rays.”
OMNI: “All children of the crew have the potential for this type of injury.”
BAXTER: “Jesus. How long until we can get you back to the ship?”
NIVEN: “Three days.”
Regardless of how she feels about Niven, Clarke has a history with him. She masks sadness and concern with anger.
CLARKE: “We have to do something.”
Niven glances between Baxter and the wrecked medical station.
NIVEN: “Maybe you could fix the auto-doc?”
Baxter makes her way past Niven to the damaged wall unit.
[Baxter crouches down to examine its state.]
BAXTER: “I’m good, but not that good.”
She pokes through the auto-doc’s remains, examining it as Clarke lowers her seat in the background.
Clarke stands and walks to the science station.
Clarke stands and walks to the science station. She pulls up a map of the planet’s surface. Then she zooms in on their location, correlating it with another dot.
CLARKE: “We need to find a TerraCat”
BAXTER: “A rover? You’re crazy. The closest Hab is nowhere near here.”
[Clarke continues typing.]
Clarke pulls up a map of the dayside of Persephone. She locates a hab module close to the terminator.
CLARKE: “Forty-Seven is just over the mountains to the west.”
Clarke goes to a wall dispenser and yanks out a CONTAINER.
BAXTER: “What are you doing?”
Clarke places the container on the floor.
CLARKE: “This drone could be there in twenty-five minutes.”
She opens it, revealing a futuristic DRONE.
[Close-up shot of the drone.]
EXT. PERSEPHONE, LANDING SITE
Clarke walks with determination to a spot where she plans to launch the drone. Baxter stumbles behind her.
Catching up, Baxter notices the distant terminator storm as Clarke kneels.
BAXTER: “That’s a big-ass mountain range. Are we sure the rover can make it here in time?”
CLARKE: “If we programmed it right, it shouldn’t be a problem.”
CLARKE: “It’ll drive the TerraCat back through the dry riverbed east of here.”
BAXTER: “Clarke, you’re dreaming. The drone can’t get through that.”
[Clarke hits a button on the drone. Lights blink and wings move on the side.]
“What?!”
BAXTER: (gesturing to the horizon) “That!”
Clarke looks up and notices the massive flashes of lightning.
CLARKE: “So, what do we do?”
BAXTER: “How far away are those mountains?”
Clarke stands and pulls her LASER RANGER — a pair of futuristic binoculars — from a utility belt. She activates it and scans the distance.
CLARKE: “About two klicks. The map says the range is about five clicks across.”
BAXTER: “Five clicks? Gimme that…”
Baxter snatches the ranger from an irritated Clarke.
BAXTER: (looking and pointing) “There’s a crevasse there.”
BAXTER: “We could use it to get to the day side.”
Clarke looks at the foreboding storm. She makes a decision.
[Sound of storm in the distance.]
CLARKE: “We..? Don’t you mean me?”
Clarke snatches the back the device and clips it on her utility belt.
[Wider of shot of Clarke and Baxter reveals the drone on the ground and the AeroFox standing in the background.]
She takes the drone and tosses it on her back.
It snaps into place with a magnetic groan.
She then takes the Flash-scanner from her belt and slaps it on her wrist. Activating it, Clarke projects a bright beam, panning across the desert.
CLARKE: “Work with Niven on the shield.”
Clarke turns to leave. Feeling guilty, Baxter grabs her arm.
BAXTER: “Hey! Hold up…” (sincere) “Thanks for getting us down here in one piece.”
CLARKE: (incredulous) “Just doing my job.”
Clarke jogs away.
[Camera pans with Clarke.]
[Camera pans with Clarke.]
[Clarke runs to camera.]
Baxter calls after her.
BAXTER: “Turn on your homing beacon!”
Clarke stops in her tracks without turning around and taps a button on her wrist. A strobe flashes on her O2 backpack.
With her flash-scanner guiding the way, she takes off again.
[Clarke runs into the darkness.]
In the background, a worried Baxter starts back toward the AeroFox as Clarke becomes a pulsating dot in the distance.
[Wearily, Baxter turns her back on Clarke and heads to the AeroFox.]
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT – EXT. AEROFOX
A loud beep fills the cabin. Niven is oblivious as he works at the science station.
The hatch opens. Baxter enters.
Niven glances over weakly as she rips the O2 mask from her head.
She takes off the life support unit as the hatch closes.
[Baxter approaches Niven, setting her life-support mask on the ground.]
NIVEN: “You okay?”
Baxter pulls the other stool from the science station and plops down on it. She catches her breath, then surveys Niven with concern.
BAXTER: “I’m the least of our worries.”
NIVEN: “Where’s Clarke?”
BAXTER: “She’ll be back soon.” (turning to the Omni strip) “Omni, can you switch on our beacon?”
OMNI: “Of course.”
EXT – A light blasts skyward from the top of the ship.
INT –
Baxter smiles weakly at Niven.
BAXTER:”Think we could figure out what’s messing with my shield?”
Niven pulls back from the station, giving her full attention.
NIVEN: “Yeah… Better do it while I’m still upright.” (looking around) “Hey, you seen my gyroscope? Helps me think.”
EXT. PERSEPHONE, MOUNTAINS – NIGHT
[Lightning flashes above the mountains. In the far distance, the light beacon of the AeroFox can be seen.]
[The camera tilts down into the valleys of the mountains.]
[Continue tilting down. On the valley floor, Clarke is barely visible. The light from her beacon bobs as she runs.]
[Cut to the valley floor. Clarke runs to screen right.]
Clarke jogs at a brisk pace as she continues through a cleft in the rubble-strewn mountain range.
Lightning and wind fill the air. A wintry mix of snow and rain obscures her view.
Training aside, she’s clearly not used to the stormy planet.
[The camera pulls out from a close shot of Clarke’s face, tight with concentration.]
Clarke masks her fears, attempting to remain calm in the maelstrom. Yet, regardless of her muted emotions, she winces at every electric flash and blaring rumble of thunder.
JUMP CUT TO:
FLASHBACK: The Girl watches on the monitor as the skiff carrying her parents approaches the area of damage near Colony One’s fuel cryo-tanks.
Her eyes widen with fear as sparks jump from a mangled power system.
An arc of electricity leaps out, damaging one of the repair drones working on a breach that’s venting gas.
The drone ceases functioning and drifts as the couple disembarks and makes their way to the affected area.
Bova taps his radio.
BOVA: “We need to cut power to that array. Clarke, you need to back off!”
FATHER: (COMM VOICE) “No, we got this! Just give us a minute…”
Clarke is startled back to reality when the SUIT VOICE — a built-in assistant with a female voice — issues a warning. She stops to listen.
SUIT VOICE: “Lightning detected. Find shelter immediately!”
[A forked lance of lightning strikes the canyon wall above.]
CLARKE: (scoffing) “Yeah, right… Where?”
Clarke begins jogging again, panning with her flash-scanner.
[Trying to find a path, Clarke focuses in on her head’s up display.]
[The scanner analyzes the canyon walls, digitizing their topography into a display.]
[As a wall of black rock looms, the HUD’s scanner interface warns of a detected obstruction.]
She sighs and stops once more, having reached an impasse — a huge ROCK SLIDE blocks the chasm before her!
[Clarke shines her flashlight across the rock slide’s craggy surface.]
[Panning the light’s beam back and forth across the rock’s surface reveals depressions that could serve as climbing aids.]
A frustrated Clarke surveys the rubble and then backs up to take a running start.
[Clarke sweeps her flashlight down.]
[Clarke begins her running charge for the rock slide.]
[Overhead shot of Clarke as she jumps.]
She lands on the rock face and begins climbing with ease.
[The camera pulls back as Clarke ascends.]
[Shot from the back as Clarke scales the rock face.]
[From a close side angle, Clarke continues her progress up the rocks.]
[Close view of Clark as she powers through the home stretch.]
As she nears the top, a massive bolt of lightning strikes the upper rim of the canyon to her left.
A clap of thunder startles Clarke, causing her to lose her concentration!
[Amidst the pelting rain and snow, Clarke plummets through the air.]
Her grip fails and she slips and falls on her back at the bottom of the ravine — landing hard on the drone!
[Clarke tumbles head over heels further down the slope.]
[With a final thud, Clarke crashes to the bottom of the ravine.]
CLARKE: “Ow!”
Clarke looks over her shoulder with a worried look.
CLARKE: “Oh no…”
She taps a button on her wrist.
Her HUD indicates that the drone is still intact.
SUIT VOICE: “Your drone is functional.”
Clarke regains her bearings, then stands, ignoring the pain of impact. She dusts herself off.
[Close shot of Clarke’s face. She is resolved and ready.]
More determined, Clarke starts climbing again. She takes the storm into account, moving with an extra-cautious resolve.
[The tiny profile of Clarke clambers up a large and imposing rock face. Her beacon light bobs as she climbs.]
Unbeknownst to her, the retaining clip on the left hose connecting the backpack to her oxygen mask has been broken and dangles precariously. She continues on unaware.
EXT. AEROFOX
The beacon of the AeroFox pierces the eternal night.
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
Inside the ship, Niven plays with his gyroscope, spinning it on the console.
He reviews a map of the Very Low Frequency (VLF) shield nodes spread out across the planet’s face.
[Close shot of map. Installation markers blink over terrain.]
He overlaps them with a plot of the microwave power receivers.
NIVEN: “The grid’s still being fed power, but, for some reason, these specific nodes are offline.”
[Tighter shot of map, showing the microwave power receivers and the offline nodes.]
Baxter leans back against the central column. Looking nearly as ill as he does, she forces herself to pay attention.
BAXTER: “Which ones?”
Niven causes the map to flash with the affected locations.
NIVEN: “Those.”
Niven shuts down the map of the human tech on Persephone, leaving behind only the natural formations.
Suddenly, he coughs and winces — crying out in pain.
Baxter places a kind hand on his back. Niven pulls himself together.
NIVEN: (fighting through the pain). “Wait a second… If I highlight the glyphs…”
Niven brings up an image that outlines the huge impressions. He then reinstates the map of the shield grid, focusing only on the non-functioning nodes.
The result [overlapping of two maps] is astounding.
NIVEN: “See what I’m seeing?”
BAXTER: “What the..?”
There is a clear similarity to the pattern. Every single corrupted node is located on top of a geoglyph.
EXT. PERSEPHONE, MOUNTAINS – SUNRISE
[Cut to a rocky vantage, showing the red sky of the day side while terminator storms roil on the edges of the frame.]
With the storm abating above her, Clarke clambers onto the crest of the ridge she was targeting.
The snow has changed to light rain.
[The camera continues its wide circular pan, revealing more of Persephone’s landscape bathed in the light of its primary sun.]
[The pan completes its circle, showing the barren expanse of the desert framed by shadowy clouds. In the distance, the shield volcano spouts black smoke.]
[Clarke finishes her ascent to the top of the peak.]
Climbing up, she takes a knee to absorb the view.
Before is a bizarre expanse that stretches for many kilometers. Peaking just above the horizon of the vast depression, below the thinning span of the terminator storm, is the blood-red lantern of Proxima Centauri. The inky-black plume of an active shield volcano
The scene is terrifying and awe-inspiring as Clarke breathes it in.
After a beat, she pulls the drone from her shoulder.
Activating it, she sets it on the ground before her.
[Over the shoulder shot of Clarke prepping the drone.]
Its turbines kick in.
It slowly rises and then takes off into the distance.
[The drone starts its descent down the mountains, lights shining through dark storm clouds.]
[The drone approaches the camera through the storm.]
[Lightning flashes as the drone whizzes past the camera.]
[Clarke rises from a kneeling position.]
Clarke stands and quickly checks her radiation monitor.
It indicates that she’s just inside safe tolerances.
[Clarke reaches for something on her utility belt.]
Clarke pulls a pair of binoculars from her belt and watches the drone dwindle to the point of near invisibility.
[The drone recedes through a view of Clarke’s binoculars, surrounded by blue tracking brackets.]
She takes them from her helmet and wrinkles her brow in thought.
[Clarke taps the interface point on her wrist.]
CLARKE: “Find Hab Module Forty-Seven.”
The flash-scanner on her wrist lights up as it searches. The map on the circular display shifts and re-centers itself. It blinks near the icon of a hab module.
Clarke returns to the binoculars.
[The blue trackers show nothing but alien wasteland.]
Inside its display an arrow points her in the correct direction to look. It blinks as the HAB MODULE comes into frame.
[Clarke zooms in to gets a better look at Hab Module Forty-Seven.]
[Satisfied, Clarke checks the lay of the land.]
Clarke pans to her left to see a dry river bed that extends far to the south and eventually up to the edge of the range she’s standing on.
She smiles. This is going to work.
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
Baxter and a weakening Niven are in a heated discussion.
NIVEN: “It was right there, staring at us in the face the whole time.”
BAXTER: “Then how come the Colony One crew didn’t notice it?”
NIVEN: “They think the formations are just ore deposits. Why would they?”
BAXTER: (tired of arguing) “You need to lie down.”
Omni lowers Niven’s chair into the bed position. Niven stands reluctantly and staggers to the chair.
[With Baxter’s help, Niven slumps down on his chair.]
[Holding his chest, Niven collects himself.]
NIVEN: “Nah… Hear me out. Whatever made the glyphs… shut down the shield. There’s no other explanation.”
Baxter is blown away by Niven’s calm certainty.
BAXTER: “There could be plenty of explanations! Maybe something to do with the planet’s magnetic field.”
Before Niven can retort, a transmission bursts to life.
CLARKE: (COMM VOICE) “AeroFox, come in.”
Baxter taps the comms button on the science station.
BAXTER: “We’re here. What’s up?”
EXT. PERSEPHONE, MOUNTAINS – SUNSET
Clarke walks along the ridge, about to return to the ship.
CLARKE: “Drone deployed.”
BAXTER: (COMM VOICE) “Good work.”
CLARKE: “How’s Kyle?”
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
[Baxter leans on the science station as she talks to Clarke.]
With muted humor Baxter observes Niven.
BAXTER: “He’s fine. Going on about aliens again.”
NIVEN: (tired of being bullied) “No, I’m not…”
CLARKE: (COMM VOICE) “That sounds about right. I’m on my way back. See you in forty-five.”
BAXTER: “Copy that. AeroFox out.”
Niven attempts to sit up.
NIVEN: “You know, we really should –”
Baxter puts her hand on his left shoulder, restraining him.
BAXTER: (completing his sentence) “Get some rest? Both of us.”
She turns to the image of overlapping nodes and geoglyphs.
BAXTER: “But, someone needs to work this shield problem and it ain’t you.”
Niven has already fallen asleep as Baxter was talking.
She pats his head and turns to sit at the science station.
OMNI: “Actually, Engineer, your magnetic field concept is quite intriguing. I’d like to run an analysis.”
BAXTER: “Do that. I’m going to close my eyes for a minute.”
Baxter rests her head on the station and falls asleep.
EXT. PERSEPHONE, HAB MODULE SITE – DAY
The drone shoots out of the sky toward HAB 47.
[The camera continues to pan, following the drone as it coasts over the desert.]
[A closer shot tracks the drone.]
Other hab modules can be seen in the distance. The trapezoid-shaped structure is embedded in the aeroshell it used to land on the planet. The construct stands out against the desolate plain.
[The drone approaches the hab module’s monolithic bulk.]
[The drone decelerates to a stop above a hatch on the hab module’s roof.]
The drone aligns with a port on top of the hab and descends.
Upon landing, the building suddenly powers-up with various lights coming to life.
[The drone hovers and waits as the hab activates.]
The drone is lowered into the structure.
[The drone enters the darkness of the hab, coasting out of a shaft of light thrown by the open hatch.]
[Below the drone, the TerraCat’s hatch opens.]
[The hab hatch shuts, enclosing the drone in darkness.]
Moments later, a garage door opens on the hab.
[The camera pans up from a distance as the garage door continues to rise.]
With an electrical whine, the TERRACAT — a tough, futuristic all-terrain vehicle — emerges.
[The camera continues to rise as the TerraCat shreds out of frame.]
The drone is attached on top of it as it departs and drives away on the path Clarke witnessed earlier in her binoculars.
[The camera pans with the TerraCat as it speeds past the hab module.]
[The TerraCat drives on into the wasted desert, kicking up dust. In the distance, lightning spikes the storming sky.]
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
Baxter is sleeping.
The sound of Niven and Omni in the midst of a discussion stirs her from her slumber.
Niven is propped up on his seat. He notices a groggy Baxter waking up.
NIVEN: “Glad you got some sleep.”
BAXTER: “Yeah. You seem better yourself.”
NIVEN: “Nah… Just took a shit-load of pain killers.”
BAXTER: “Are you insane?!”
Niven does a quick self-analysis, then responds dryly.
NIVEN: “No. Not really.”
BAXTER: “Your liver can’t process it.”
NIVEN: (waving her off) “The auto-doc’s on its way.”
Niven points to the monitor.
NIVEN: “Why’d you bring up the magnetic field earlier?”
BAXTER: “I was trying to figure out a physics-slash-geology reason for what effed-up Omni.”
NIVEN: “Interesting.”
OMNI: “As you can see, they align perfectly.”
Baxter studies a chart that juxtaposes fluctuations in the magnetic field with the shield nodes and the geoglyphs.
EXT. PERSEPHONE, LANDING SITE – NIGHT
[Camera pans down, showing the AeroFox’s beacon shining from spacecraft’s tip.]
The headlights of the TerraCat illuminate the AeroFox as it drives out of the windy darkness.
It comes to a stop nearby.
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT 54
Baxter is aghast at the implication of Omni’s statement.
BAXTER: “You’re saying the geoglyphs really are somehow related to this?”
Niven is excited that Baxter is beginning to get it.
NIVEN: “Yes! The nodes that landed on top of the formations are all non-functional. The ones that didn’t are at one hundred percent.”
Baxter leans in and frowns at the images.
BAXTER: “You said they looked shriveled up. Omni, can you compare the shots Kyle took in orbit against the ones from a century ago?”
Pictures of the geoglyph appear side by side. The older images on the left show a clear and distinct outline while the newer ones on the right are smaller and anemic-looking.
NIVEN: “Flowers. Drying up without water.”
BAXTER: “This is nuts. They’re ore deposits!”
NIVEN: “Ore deposits that shot an E-M-P at our ship!”
BAXTER: “We don’t know that!”
NIVEN: (leaning back) “Then who did?”
OMNI: “Just a moment…”
A chime resounds through the cabin.
OMNI: “The TerraCat has arrived.”
Baxter smiles and slowly stands.
BAXTER: “Great. Time to get you–”
Baxter is stopped in her tracks, looking around the cabin.
BAXTER: “Wait… Where’s Clarke?”
NIVEN: “Huh? Don’t know. I woke up just before you did. I figured she–“
BAXTER: “Omni, how long did it take to create that chart?!”
OMNI: “One hour and thirty-two minutes.”
[Niven’s jaw drops in surprise.]
Niven stares in horror as Baxter grabs her O2 mask.
EXT. PERSEPHONE, LANDING SITE
[The AeroFox stands beneath a storming sky.]
[Seen from beneath, the hatch on the side of the AeroFox begins to open.]
Bounding from the AeroFox hatchway, Baxter struggles once again to make her way down the ladder.
[Baxter descends the steep ladder, looking down and regarding the drop to the ground. In the background, lightning spikes the sky.]
Baxter gives up and jumps down.
She hurts her legs in the high gravity and struggles to stay upright.
Once her feet are firmly on the ground, she briefly rubs her knees.
BAXTER: “Ouch!”
Baxter hits a button on her wrist.
BAXTER: (COMM VOICE) “Clarke! It’s Baxter. Come in. Clarke?”
Baxter gives up and lopes toward the nearby TerraCat.
BAXTER: (COMM VOICE) “TerraCat, open hatch!”
The rover’s gull-wing doors open.
Baxter climbs inside.
INT. TERRACAT
The engineer makes her way to the rear section of the sleek rover.
[Taking stock of her surroundings, Baxter looks left to check the front of the TerraCat.]
[Sweeping right, Persephone’s night sky is visible through the rover’s open door.]
[The camera finishes panning over the rover’s interior. All is quiet.]
The engineer makes her way to the rear section of the sleek rover.
She finds a large case labelled with a medical symbol.
Baxter lugs the large metal and plastic AUTO-DOC CASE out of its cradle.
It slips from her fingers in the high gravity. With a loud crash, it lands hard on the floor of the vehicle.
BAXTER: “Damn it.”
Baxter straightens her flight suit in anger and steels herself.
[Baxter bends down, reaching for the auto-doc case.]
She opens the case and reaches for the circular AUTODOC, retrieving it.
[Baxter holds the auto-doc, examining it.]
She slaps the device on her back where it snaps into place with a magnetic seal.
EXT. PERSEPHONE, LANDING SITE – NIGHT
Baxter is silhouetted by the glow of Alpha Centauri A & B as she trudges across the desert to the waiting AeroFox.
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
The hatch bursts open. Baxter steps inside with the auto-doc. A weakening Niven is concerned as he uses the scanner.
Baxter continues wearing her O2 mask — speaking through it.
BAXTER: (COMM VOICE) (panting) “I got the auto-doc.”
NIVEN: (feverish) “I… I think I located her beacon. It’s a couple of clicks from here.”
Baxter sees the map projection info on-screen.
NIVEN: “Edge of the mountains.”
Niven looks up at Baxter from the scanner’s viewing hood.
NIVEN: “I tried to reach her. No response.”
BAXTER: (COMM VOICE) “Omni, shoot her location to the TerraCat and help me with Kyle.”
OMNI: “Of course.”
Niven’s chair lowers. Baxter lifts him away from the science station and places him in his seat.
NIVEN: “I’m so sorry. Lost track of time.”
Baxter removes the auto-doc from her back and activates it.
BAXTER: (COMM VOICE) “This is on me.”
Baxter places the device on Niven’s chest.
BAXTER: (COMM VOICE) “Omni, can you supervise this procedure?”
OMNI: “No. I would not consider myself capable of performing nano-surgery at this time. I have already endangered the mission and–“
BAXTER: (COMM VOICE) (interrupting) “Dammit, Omni! We don’t have time–“
NIVEN: “Guys. The auto-doc can handle it. Or, why call it an ‘auto-doc’?”
Niven smiles weakly.
EXT. PERSEPHONE, LANDING SITE
[The rover revs into motion and drives around the Aerofox.]
The rover heads for the nearby mountains.
Above, the perpetual storm continues its endless blasts of lightning.
[The rover continues out of frame, leaving the massive shield volcano and the AeroFox alone.]
EXT. PERSEPHONE, MOUNTAINS
[In the hills bordering the valley where Clarke lies unconscious, storm clouds rage above the shadowed forms of distant peaks. Lightning stabs down, lighting their rocky faces.]
On the edge of the rocky hills bordering the valley, a nearly unconscious Clarke is pinned underneath a slide of rocks.
The left tube to her backpack has been disconnected! Oxygen vents into the air. The beacon flashes on her backpack.
[Clarke’s unconscious face can be seen through her helmet. The storm is reflected in her visor.]
Baxter’s voice emanates from the speaker in her air mask.
BAXTER (COMM VOICE): “Clarke? You out there? Talk to me.”
Clarke doesn’t move or respond. The Suit Voice detects the transmission, answering for her.
SUIT VOICE: “Attention. Astronaut Clarke is unconscious. Oxygen compromised. Reserves at fifteen percent!”
INT. TERRACAT
Baxter rides inside the self-driving vehicle. She looks down at the monitor on the dashboard. It shows a pulsing blip.
BAXTER: “What?! Darcy, wake up. Can you hear me? I’m coming.” (more emphatic) “Darcy, wake up!”
No response.
SUIT VOICE: (COMM VOICE) “First aid may be required.”
BAXTER: (frantic) “Darcy!”
Baxter speaks to the rover’s control interface.
BAXTER: “TerraCat, I need you to go faster!”
It responds in a softer female voice than Clarke’s suit.
TERRACAT: “We are at maximum safe velocity.”
BAXTER: “Would it help if I said please?!”
The TerraCat zooms onward into the dark.
EXT. PERSEPHONE – MOUNTAINS
Baxter’s verbal prodding has an effect. Clarke wakes up.
EXT. PERSEPHONE – MOUNTAINS
Baxter’s verbal prodding has an effect. Clarke wakes up.
[Clarke sits up and painfully attempts to move the rock pinning her leg.]
CLARKE: (coughing) “Bax… Baxter…”
She attempts to roll on her back. Her left foot is pinned in the rubble. She cries out in pain.
INT. TERRACAT
The ping resounds faster as the rover closes in. The light from Clarke’s flash-scanner arcs in the darkness ahead.
BAXTER: “There she is. Stop!”
EXT. PERSEPHONE, MOUNTAINS
The TerraCat screeches to a stop.
Baxter jumps out and staggers over to a wheezing Clarke who waves weakly in the rover’s headlights.
Clarke watches her approach through the fog of hypoxia.
[Shot of the ghostly figure from Clarke’s POV.]
For a moment, Baxter‘s image is transposed with that of Clarke’s mother! She reaches out to her daughter with tenderness.
CLARKE: (weakly) “M… Mom..?”
Clarke clears the vision. [The image of her mother is] replaced with a concerned Baxter.
BAXTER: “What are you saying, kiddo? You must be delirious.”
Air fills the mask. Clarke inhales deeply.
SUIT VOICE: “Oxygen restored.”
Baxter finds the dangling tube and shoves it back in place.
BAXTER: “You’re going to need a new clip for that tube. You alright?”
Clarke regains consciousness, coughing in her mask.
CLARKE: “Stupid planet. Ow!” (pointing) “My foot!”
Baxter eyes the restraining boulder and mumbles to herself.
BAXTER: “I swear to God. If I have to lift anymore shit today…”
Baxter sighs as she struggles to lift the boulder.
After several powerful heaves, she gets it to budge enough for Clarke to remove her leg.
[In the background, the Terracat’s bright headlights pierce the night.]
[Closer shot of Baxter lifting the rock, as Clarke pulls her leg free.]
CLARKE: “Thanks.”
BAXTER: “You want me to carry you, too?”
Clarke laughs slightly and winces in pain.
EXT. TERRACAT
Clarke’s left arm is draped over Baxter’s shoulder as the two women limp to the rover. They yell over the wind.
CLARKE: “The drone worked…”
BAXTER: “Kyle’s already getting fixed up.”
CLARKE: “Awesome. Then, we better get going.”
BAXTER: “Great. We should regroup and–”
Clarke shakes her head and stops in her tracks.
CLARKE: “No. We’re heading to Two-Twelve.”
Baxter locks eyes with her.
BAXTER: “It’s way over on the other side!”
CLARKE: “So?! We’ll retrace the river bed the rover took to get here. You have to fix the damn shield!”
An angry Clarke hobbles past to the waiting rover.
BAXTER: “Darcy, you just fell of a cliff!” (calling after her) “At least go back and do a med-scan.”
Clarke ignores her, opens the door and climbs in with her injured ankle. Baxter throws up her arms and follows her.
[The Terracat’s exterior door closes.]
[Inside the sealed TerraCat, the cabin starts to pressurize. Clarke reaches for the quick-release on her mask.]
TERRACAT: “Cabin pressurizing.”
[Clarke clicks the quick release on the right side of her helmet, ripping it off in one frantic motion. She gasps for air.]
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
Niven is rolled on his side. The robotic arms of the auto-doc move around him. One attaches to the small of his back, delivering a dose of nanomachines. The radio kicks on.
CLARKE: (COMM VOICE) “TerraCat to AeroFox Two.”
Niven is still in pain as he reaches for the radio button.
NIVEN: “You alright?”
CLARKE: (COMM VOICE) “I’m okay. You?”
NIVEN: “On the mend.”
OMNI: “The first round of nanites were just injected. With his liver toxicity at such dangerous levels, the procedure will take time.”
CLARKE: (COMM VOICE) “We understand. Listen, we’re on our way out to Node Two-Twelve.”
NIVEN: “Two-Twelve?”
CLARKE: (COMM VOICE) “It’s a ninety-minute drive from here. Do me a favor, send us your E – M patch. We’re gonna upload it.”
Niven panics, dislodging the auto-doc. It clatters to the floor, interrupting the treatment.
NIVEN: “Wait… I’m sure Ms. Baxter hasn’t had the time to tell you, but we found something weird with the geoglyphs.”
[The AutoDoc falls to the floor with a clatter.]
CLARKE: (COMM VOICE) “Honestly, I don’t care.”
NIVEN: “But Darcy, it could have something to do with what’s wrong with the shield! We need to–“
EXT. PERSEPHONE, MOUNTAINS – SUNRISE
[The TerraCat emerges from the mountains and drives downhill, kicking up a cloud of dust.]
CLARKE: (COMM VOICE) “Niven, send me the patch. That’s an order! We’ll talk about your science shit later.”
INT. TERRACAT / EXT. CANYON – NIGHT
In the midst of lightning and rain, the rover continues in self-drive mode. Through the windows, the rocky walls of the canyon slide past. The cabin is now pressurized and both women have removed their masks.
Clarke rubs her ankle, still recovering. Baxter listens, fuming.
NIVEN: (COMM VOICE) “Science shit?! Science shit got us to this planet! And science shit is going to keep us alive!”
The two woman look at each other in shock at Niven’s level of emotion.
The two woman look at each other in shock at Niven’s level of emotion. Clarke mouths a silent ‘wow’.
NIVEN: (COMM VOICE) Tell you what… I’ll send the code, if you get me a sample!
CLARKE: “Jesus! A sample of what?”
NIVEN: “The geoglyph, goddamn it! Look at your screen.”
A sattelite map pops up on the screen next to Clarke.
NIVEN: “Two-Twelve is sitting on right on top of a major formation. Ms. Baxter, will you please back me up here!”
Clarke scans the rock formation, then locks eyes with Baxter.
BAXTER: “He’s right.”
CLARKE: “Okay, okay. I’ll see what we can do. After we install the patch.”
NIVEN: (COMM VOICE) “Thank you. End transmission!”
Clarke shakes her head, happy for the conversation to end.
Outside the TerraCat traverses the canyon in the storm.
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
The transmission cuts off. Niven lays back, seething.
NIVEN: “You know, I spend forever dreaming of coming here and I end up knocked on my ass and trapped with Darcy ‘my Daddy’s the Captain’ Clarke!”
OMNI: “Well, at least you have me.”
NIVEN: “And I wish it was just us! Sorry, Omni. I’ve had to deal with that little brat for most of my life. She really pisses me off sometimes.”
OMNI: “Having watched you and the other children grow up, I can attest to the fact that you all piss each other off from time to time.”
NIVEN: “You’re probably right.”
OMNI: “I know I’m right.”
(beat)
OMNI: “Kyle, I need you to set aside your emotions. You interrupted the nanotherapy. We have to restart the procedure from the beginning.”
Niven places the device back on his abdomen.
NIVEN: “Ugh… Okay, buddy.”
He grabs his gyroscope and lays back for the treatment.
FADE TO BLACK:
[The camera pans across the plain, tracking the TerraCat’s progress.]
The TerraCat clears the mountains and enters the dayside of the planet.
[From a close side view, the camera continues to track the TerraCat’s path across the plain.]
In the far distance, the slope of a massive shield volcano is visible. Smoke billows from its caldera.
INT. TERRACAT – DAY
Baxter stands and looks out the window at the alien view as
Clarke watches her.
[Tighter shot of Baxter looking at Clarke.]
[Baxter looks at the Terracat’s right rear seat.]
Baxter removes her mask from the right rear seat, sets it aside and sits next to Clarke.
[Wider shot of Baxter sitting down next to Clarke.]
EXT. PERSEPHONE, MOUNTAINS
The rover is a tiny gleaming speck against the sprawling landscape as it cruises past small lakes and salt flats. Proxima hangs like an angry, unmoving ball in the sky.
DISSOLVE TO:
INT. TERRACAT – DAY
The women are silent as they bounce across the otherworldly
desert.
Clarke reviews the mapping scanner beside her. On the
map, she sees the rover’s icon turn to avoid a large crater.
CLARKE: “That crater was huge.” (pointing outside) “But, it’s nothing compared to that volcano over there.”
Baxter fixes Clarke’s O2 mask. She eyes Clarke suspiciously.
Baxter: “You know, it’s okay to admit you’re scared to be here. I know I am.”
CLARKE: “I’m not. But, it doesn’t matter anyway. We’re here to stay.”
BAXTER: “I guess it has to be better than being stuck on Colony One.”
CLARKE: ‘It can drive you a little nuts.” (reminiscing) “So, I fell in love with the stars.”
BAXTER: “Is that why you became a pilot?”
CLARKE: “Totally. I love to get out. Explore. Someday I might even fly to Proxima C. Take a look around. So, what was it like on Earth?”
BAXTER: “It wasn’t that different than the ship in the end. If you were lucky enough to live in the domes.”
CLARKE: “Idiots. I can’t get my brain around people destroying their own planet.”
BAXTER: “Try experiencing it firsthand.”
A question has been eating at Baxter. She broaches it.
BAXTER: “Can I ask you something?”
CLARKE: “Sure, I guess..”
BAXTER: “Did I hear you call Captain Bova ‘Dad’ before we launched?”
CLARKE: “That’s right. He’s raised me.”
BAXTER: “Hmm… Can I ask how–“
Clarke is resolute. The topic is off limits.
CLARKE: (interrupting) “No. You can’t.”
An awkward silence ensues. Clarke breaks the tension.
CLARKE: “So, you were there for it…”
BAXTER: “For what?”
CLARKE: “The Big Top.”
BAXTER: (laughing slightly) “You mean The Big Tip. The ‘Tipping Point’. Runaway greenhouse.”
BAXTER: (cringing at the thought) “No. That was before I was born.”
CLARKE: “Was it really that bad?”
BAXTER: “We’re moving to an irradiated ball of rock four light years away. What do you think?”
CLARKE: (changing the subject) “You know, when I was a kid, my Dad made printouts of Earth landmarks.” (smiling) “We’d use ‘em like trading cards. Niagara Falls for a Grand Canyon. Eiffel Tower for a Great Pyramid. Places I’d never visit.”
BAXTER: “If it’s any consolation, I never visited any of them either.”
CLARKE: “Where did you grow up?”
BAXTER: “America. Illinois. Came from a long line of farmers.”
CLARKE: “What kind?”
Baxter finishes her repair. She gives the mask a once-over.
BAXTER: “Corn. Drought ended that. My folks gave up. They wanted to go to Mars.”
CLARKE: “Ugh… Mars. Heard about that in school. What a disaster.”
BAXTER: “Yeah. And by then, aside from the Moon, we’d waited too long to colonize anywhere else. Game over.”
CLARKE: “And, here we are.”
Her work complete, Baxter hands Clarke her repaired mask.
BAXTER: “Here we are.”
Clarke takes the mask and nods a thanks.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. PERSEPHONE, GEOGLYPH RIDGE – DAY
The TerraCat casts a long shadow as it nears a symmetrical tendril of GEOGLYPH.
[The camera pans out, revealing the vast scope of the geoglyph.]
Its metallic material creates a giant berm kilometers wide. Its ashen color differs from the brown of the main patterns seen from orbit.
[A bird’s eye shot shows a flat tract of barren desert.]
[The TerraCat rockets into frame, kicking up dust.]
[The TerraCat slows as it approaches the main bulk of geoglyph.]
The rover stops.
INT. TERRACAT
Baxter leans forward in her seat, looking out the window.
BAXTER: “These things are huge. No wonder they affect the magnetic field.”
Clarke looks at the geogylph through her Laser Ranger.
CLARKE: “They’re perfect.”
CLARKE: “We can just scoop the ore right off the surface and get construction started right away.”
Baxter frowns. Before she can respond, the radio activates.
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “AeroFox Two to TerraCat.”
CLARKE: “We read you, go ahead.”
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “Another flare may be imminent.”
CLARKE: “How long?”
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “I will update you when I have more accurate information.”
CLARKE: “Do that. TerraCat out.”
EXT. PERSEPHONE, GEOGYLPH – MOMENTS LATER
[The TerraCat rumbles into the shot, trawling towards the geoglyph.]
The rover uses a small hill to drive onto the geoglyph.
[The TerraCat crests the hill and continues onto the geoglyph.]
Half a kilometer into the formation is the landing site of SHIELD NODE 212.
[A side-mounted camera on the TerraCat shows the shield node rumbling closer.]
Its gold transmission tower rises from the center of a black AEROSHELL similar to the one used to land Hab 47.
[The TerraCat continues toward the tower.]
[The node’s tower rises over the TerraCat’s approach.]
[The rover comes to a halt on the Aeroshell’s disk.]
EXT. SHIELD NODE, AEROSHELL
[Grounded shot of the TerraCat rolling in.]
The TerraCat drives partially onto the aeroshell and parks with its rear wheels resting on the geoglyph material.
The duo disembark wearing their O2 masks.
Clarke favors her left ankle, hopping slightly.
Baxter hauls a tool kit out of the rover. It’s clearly too heavy. Clarke hobbles over to assist.
CLARKE: “You want me to take that?”
BAXTER: “No thanks, babe.”
Baxter heaves the kit onto her back. It snaps into place.
BAXTER: “Gotta get used to this gravity. No better time than the present.”
Clarke looks at the sky, and then at the surrounding desert. A pool of water has collected on the ground nearby.
CLARKE: “Whew. It’s a lot warmer over here.”
BAXTER: “Imagine how hot it must be down at the equator. It’s always high noon.”
EXT. SHIELD NODE, TRANSMITTER
Unlike other areas of the planet seen previously, this environment is eerily silent and even a bit menacing.
Clarke slowly follows Baxter across the aeroshell.
They approach the tower cautiously.
[Over the shoulder shot of them approaching the aeroshell.]
Connected to its metal truss is a power supply and COMPUTER INTERFACE. Lights flash on its face indicating an offline status.
Baxter lumbers up to the structure, taking the toolkit off her back.
BAXTER: “I’ll pop the main board.”
Baxter gets to work, using a drill to remove a series of screws.
[Arms crossed, Clarke watches Baxter’s exertions.]
[Baxter pries the hatch open.]
She then pulls a large computer NODE-BOARD from its housing.
Lost in thought, Clarke walks around the tower, surveying it.
[Camera leans back with Clarke’s view.]
She stops and looks at Baxter with a frown.
CLARKE: “What do you think it’s like?”
BAXTER: (still working) “What’s ‘what’ like?”
CLARKE: “Earth. What’s left? Who’s left?” (concerned) “Dad says he got transmissions for a long time, but then they stopped.”
Baxter stops working, and looks in Clarke’s direction.
BAXTER: “That’s crazy! There were two more Colony ships under construction when I left.”
CLARKE: “But that was fifty years ago. What do you think happened?”
BAXTER: “No idea. But we have to find out.”
Clarke continues to circle the base of the tower.
Baxter returns to work, giving the board a visual once-over.
She notices the spark of a electric discharge that briefly cascades across its crystal circuitry, then dissipates.
BAXTER: “Kyle’s right. Something weird is going on. This node got hit by pulse just like we did.”
Baxter activates a computer screen above the node slots. She checks the power flow. It pulses oddly.
BAXTER: “This is odd. It’s like there’s energy coming from somewhere other than the fuel cells.”
Baxter activates a computer screen above the node slots. She checks the power flow. It pulses oddly.
BAXTER: “This is odd. It’s like there’s energy coming from somewhere other than the fuel cells.”
On the other side of the tower, a shocking image stops Clarke in her tracks.
She speaks over the internal comm-link.
CLARKE: “Um… Baxter? Can you come here?”
Baxter is uninterested and increasingly irritated as she places a small circular device from the tool kit on the node-board. She taps her wrist computer and begins the upload.
BAXTER: “Just wait a second.”
CLARKE: “Dammit, Baxter. You need to see this. Right. Now.”
BAXTER: (putting down the board) “What?!”
Standing sluggishly, she walks around to Clarke’s side.
Clarke points to the back of the transmission tower.
CLARKE: “That.”
The center of the aeroshell has been violently breached by what appears to be geoglyph material. It has ‘grown’ up the sides of the antennae assembly.
Clarke points to the opening.
CLARKE: “Could it have breached on impact?”
The crystalline glyph material glints in the ochre sunlight.
They move toward it cautiously.
BAXTER: “No friggin’ way.” (looking up) “The tower deployment was fine. This happened after landing.”
[Wide shot shows the geoglyph growth snug against the aeroshell.]
Clarke removes a pick-axe from her utility belt and kneels near the growth, cautiously poking at a shard.
[Clarke draws back, preparing to strike the crystalline material with her axe.]
[Clarke takes an experimental swing at the geoglyph.]
[Clarke’s pickaxe impacts with a crack.]
[Baxter takes in the true extent of the geoglyph’s crawling progress, looking up while Clarke works by her feet.]
The protrusion continues up into the back of the node’s computer system.
[Camera tilt continues, showing the full span of the geoglyph’s growth.]
BAXTER: “That looks like years of growth.”
CLARKE: “Growth?!”
BAXTER: (tapping a wrist interface) “AeroFox, come in.”
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “AeroFox, receiving. Engineer, the solar flare–“
BAXTER: “Hold on that. There’s something odd going on out here.”
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “Please describe.”
Baxter steps closer to the geoglyph.
[Clarke cradles her pickaxe and takes in the alien crystals.]
[Baxter’s suited hand approaches the alien substance.]
BAXTER: “Geoglyph material has ruptured the node’s aeroshell.”
[The moment before her fingers make contact, Baxter hesitates, sensing the gravity of the moment.]
Baxter runs her hand over the geometrical surface.
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
A seemingly-sleeping Niven covertly opens one eye.
BAXTER: (COMM VOICE) “It’s in direct contact with the transmitter.”
OMNI: “It seems highly unlikely that would occur at landing. The aeroshell is thick enough to withstand–”
CLARKE: (COMM VOICE) (interrupting) “We know that, Omni! The geoglyph has grown through it.”
OMNI: “Grown?! Are you certain?”
Niven sits up. The gyroscope rolls off of him onto the floor.
BAXTER (COMM VOICE) It certainly looks like it.
NIVEN: (weakly) “Told you… Get a sample…”
BAXTER: (COMM VOICE) “Excuse me?!”
OMNI: “Kyle is reminding you to obtain a sample.”
OMNI: “However, this is not the time. The flare will arrive in a matter of minutes.”
[Niven looks up, eyeing the control readouts, which are flashing flare warnings.]
Niven flops back on his couch in frustration.
NIVEN: “C’mon…”
EXT. SHIELD NODE, TRANSMITTER 77
Clarke quickly stands. The two women turn to look up at Proxima Centauri.
CLARKE: (squinting at the sky) “Polarize your visor.”
They both tap buttons on their wrists; their faceplates darken.
From Baxter’s POV, the tendrils of numerous flares writhe along the flank of the red dwarf star.
BAXTER: “Oh, my God.”
NIVEN (COMM VOICE) (pleading): “Guys, please… Just one piece.”
[Wide shot of the star baking down from above, framing the TerraCat and the shield node in harsh light.]
Turning back to the geoglyph, Baxter makes a decision.
She heads to the TerraCat.
CLARKE: “Where are you going?”
BAXTER: “Use those mega-muscles.”
Clarke watches as Baxter jogs painfully toward the rover.
Frustrated, she throws up her hands, causing her to notice her radiation detector.
It’s nearing red!
Becoming stressed, Clarke gives in and grabs the pick-axe from the ground.
[Baxter sprints towards the TerraCat as fast as she can.]
Back at the TerraCat, Baxter climbs into the vehicle.
Meanwhile, Clarke hacks at the geoglyph with a ferocity that belies a hidden fear of the alien rock.
She stops to look at the raging Proxima, then returns to work.
Fragments of crystal fly off, landing on the aeroshell.
[Clarke continues to hack away at the crystal, oblivious to her surroundings.]
Clarke is caught unaware as Baxter stops her from offscreen.
BAXTER: “Stop!”
Baxter carries a SOIL-CORE — a clear plastic tube with a handle on top.
She scoffs as Clarke eases her onslaught.
BAXTER: “Jesus. We don’t need a boulder.”
In near panic, Clarke snaps the pick-axe onto her utility belt. She glances again at the sky.
CLARKE: “We gotta get out of here.”
[Anxious, Clarke rises from her position.]
CLARKE: “We gotta get out of here.”
BAXTER: “Duh…” (pointing at the TerraCat) “You go fire her up.”
Clarke takes off for the rover while Baxter places shards inside the soil-core.
On the way, she notices the computer board Baxter removed earlier.
[Baxter approaches the fallen component, shadowed by the shield node’s heights.]
[The camera pushes in towards the board on the ground.]
Clarke snatches it up.
Baxter finishes putting the geoglyph shards in the container.
She then stands, grimacing in the high gravity as she sets it tight.
Her suit speaks in the same voice as Clarke’s.
SUIT VOICE: “Radiation levels rising!”
Baxter takes a second to look at the radiation detector on her wrist. It’s just entered the red zone!
As she turns to leave, she stops — noticing with horror that the geoglyph is GROWING BACK where Clarke chipped it away!
[Slowly and inexorably, the geoglyph attempts to reclaim the AeroFox. The reflective facets of the alien rock twinkle as it crinkles in Proxima’s harsh light.]
Baxter lifts the soil-core and looks at the material inside with grave concern.
Should she even take it back with her?
[Closeup of the material in the sample core.]
INT. TERRACAT
Clarke buckles her seatbelt as Baxter climbs into the cabin, holding the soil-core in both hands. Clarke doesn’t see it.
BAXTER: (huffing) “We need to talk. I just saw–”
CLARKE: (interrupting) “I’m taking us back to that crater. We’ll use its shadow to get out of the charged particles.”
BAXTER: “Yeah, yeah… Sounds good.” (getting in her face) “Hey… You need to listen.”
Baxter sits in the seat across from her younger companion.
She pushes the soil-core container into Clarke’s view.
BAXTER: “Back there, where you chipped this off, it’s already growing back.”
CLARKE: “What do you mean?”
BAXTER: “I mean, it’s growing back! Like really fast.”
CLARKE (shifting in her seat): “What?!”
BAXTER: “Saw it with my own eyes.” (looking at the soil-core) “I don’t think this is a rock.”
Clarke’s eyes widen in fear, staring at the geoglyph sample.
CLARKE: “Then, get it outta here!”
Baxter is taken aback by Clarke’s vehemence.
BAXTER: “No!” (scanning the container) “This is inert. We need to study it.”
Clarke knows Baxter is right. She mutters under her breath.
CLARKE: “Goddamn it.”
An alarm tone sounds followed by the voice of the TerraCat.
TERRACAT: “Radiation alert. Find shelter immediately!”
Clarke shakes her head, then fires an angry look at Baxter.
CLARKE: “Just buckle in.” (pointing at the soil-core) “And keep an eye on that shit!”
Baxter buckles up, keeping the container between her feet.
CLARKE: (CONT’D) “TerraCat, take us to the coordinates.”
TERRACAT: “Proceeding to crater.”
The rover’s engine revs and whines, but is unable to move! The women are jostled hard.
BAXTER: “What the hell?”
CLARKE: “TerraCat, reverse. Full throttle!”
The engine revs louder, but still the vehicle goes nowhere.
TERRACAT: “Encountering an obstruction.”
The women look at each other with disbelief.
[Clarke stares in horror.]
[Baxter returns her shocked gaze.]
EXT. TERRACAT
[Outside, the rover’s doors cycle open.]
[Clarke and Baxter thud down from the TerraCat’s extendable staircase.]
[Continuing their investigation, they move to the front of the rover. Baxter notices the problem right away.]
The rover’s rear wheels are now encompassed in the geoglyph. It slowly extends from the ground.
The two women stare at the advancing substance.
Clarke’s eyes widen with shock.
CLARKE: “Now, it’s coming after us!”
BAXTER: “We don’t know that, maybe it’s–”
CLARKE: (interrupting) “Seriously?!”
SUIT VOICE: “Radiation near fatal exposure.”
Baxter glances between the tires and the fiery star.
BAXTER: “Shit. We gotta get out of here.”
CLARKE: “The self drive is too slow!”
BAXTER: (taking Clarke’s pick-axe) “Get inside and set the TerraCat to manual. Gun it!”
CLARKE: “Manual..?”
BAXTER: “You can fly a spaceship, but you can’t drive a car?”
CLARKE: “Like we have cars on Colony One!”
Baxter shoves the pick-axe back at her.
BAXTER: “Knock yourself out.”
[Clarke kneels down, appraising the crystal roadblock. She hefts her pick-axe and prepares to try again.]
Clarke strikes the geoglyph growing around the tires. Shards of crystal explode away.
INT. TERRACAT
[Baxter climbs into the TerraCat. The camera tracks left as she makes her way inside.]
Inside the TerraCat, Baxter straps herself into one of the rear-facing front seats.
BAXTER: “TerraCat, disengage self-drive!”
TERRACAT: “Manual steering activated.”
Baxter’s seat rotates into the forward drive position.
A steering column automatically advances toward her.
[Seat in place and wheel extended, Baxter is ready to drive.]
She puts her hands on the wheel.
Outside, Clarke makes good headway on removing the geoglyph.
[Clarke makes her way around the front of the TerraCat, ready to start on the other wheel.]
[Clarke begins chipping away at the growth around the tire.]
CLARKE: “I think I got it!”
Within the rover, Baxter now has it at full power. She turns and yells to Clarke through the open door.
BAXTER: “That’s good! Back away!”
[Baxter’s point of view in the cockpit. Her suited hands tighten as she works the TerraCat’s wheel back and forth.]
Baxter guns it. Its electric engine whines loudly, but the rover fails to move.
Baxter rocks it back and forth.
Again to no avail.
[Closer shot of the wheel as it grinds against the geoglyph’s infestation.]
On the horizon, Proxima grows brighter.
CLARKE: “Hold up!”
She uses her pick-axe to give it a final shot, hammering at the material.
Geoglyph debris flies in all directions.
CLARKE: “Try it now!”
Baxter slams her foot on the pedal.
The TerraCat breaks free.
[Loosed like a stone from a sling, Baxter controls the TerraCat’s forward lurch and spins around, kicking up dust and crystal.]
[Framed by Proxima’s searing glow, Baxter beckons from inside the cab.]
Clarke hobbles after the rover and jumps inside. The door automatically closes behind her.
EXT. SHIELD NODE
The TerraCat peels away, leaving the tower and mystery behind — heading back in the direction it came.
[The TerraCat speeds over the camera, passing out of frame.]
INT. TERRACAT
Baxter drives like a maniac.
[Clarke pulls the harness out of her seat and buckles up.]
Clarke is strapped into her seat, checking their detectors — they’re in the red zone!
TERRACAT: “Radiation levels rising.”
Baxter bangs her fist on the wheel.
BAXTER: “Am I even going in the right direction?”
CLARKE: “You’re doing fine.”
The soil-core is tossed about, rolling around the cabin.
They close in on the crater. Clarke looks forward out of the side window.
She points to a sandy ridge on the horizon.
Clarke: “There!”
EXT. PERSEPHONE DESERT
[The TerraCat pours on speed. In the distance, the edge of the dark geoglyph grows closer.]
[The rover rockets over the verge, sailing through the air.]
[The TerraCat soars over the camera. The subtle rise of the crater’s rim crusts Persephone’s horizon.]
[Slamming down, the rover speeds forward, rocking slightly as its suspension dissipates the impact.]
[The TerraCat approaches the oblong disk of the crater. Slowly bending its trajectory, the rover’s path mirrors the curve of the rocky rim.]
[The TerraCat carves an arc of dust over the plain.]
[From above, the crater’s illuminated crescent slowly rotates, camera tracking the TerraCat’s progress.]
[The TerraCat continues to circle the crater.]
The TerraCat speeds across the plain, jumping over the rim of the crater.
The far side of the bowl-shaped valley is in deep shadow.
[The TerraCat grinds over the crater rim, kicking up rocks and dust.]
They plunge into it.
[Now enveloped in the safety of the shadows, the TerraCat comes to a slow stop.]
Baxter powers down the engine.
INT. TERRACAT
Baxter looks to Clarke for confirmation that they are safe. Clarke checks the monitor. The levels are dropping. They both breathe a sigh of relief, removing their masks.
After a breath, Clarke is the first to freak out.
CLARKE: “Okay… I may not have grown up on a planet, but I know rocks don’t move like that.”
BAXTER: “Yeah. We’re not gonna be building anything out of that stuff.”
Baxter sees the node-board secured in a slot on the dash.
BAXTER (CONT’D): “Hey… You grabbed the node-board.”
CLARKE: “Plugged it in while you were out scooping up pieces of rock-monster.”
BAXTER: (checking its status) “You even uploaded the patch.”
CLARKE: “Yes. It’s why we’re out here!”
BAXTER: “Speaking of the ‘rock monster’… (pointing at the soil-core) Could you hand me that?”
Clarke spins her seat ninety-degrees, looking around.
She spies the soil-core, grabs it from the floor, and hands it to Baxter.
[Gripping the heavy cylinder firmly, Baxter takes the soil-core from Clarke.]
[While Clarke sits back down, Baxter centers the soil-core over the TerraCat’s bulkhead.]
Baxter opens a port on the dash designed for analysis and pops it inside. A breakdown of the sample is initiated.
[Clarke’s chair returns to its original position, leaving the two to stare at the processing soil core.]
BAXTER: “Think we can get a signal here?”
CLARKE: “No idea.”
Clarke plays with the radio.
CLARKE: “AeroFox, do you read?”
Clarke: “AeroFox, come in.”
After a moment, a weak static-laden connection engages.
OMNI: “Roger, TerraCat. Are you alright?”
CLARKE: “We found a place to ride it out.”
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “Excellent.” (more static) “We’re barely reading you though.”
BAXTER: “Interference from the flare. Hopefully, we can still transmit data.”
Baxter: “We got a sample of the glyph. Uplinking now.”
[Close-up on the screen as the geoglyph’s readings continue their processing.]
The thought of the geoglyph sample upsets Clarke.
CLARKE: “Omni, you’re not going to believe this. That stuff tried to eat the TerraCat!”
BAXTER: (rolling her eyes) “She’s exaggerating a little bit.”
CLARKE: “I don’t think so.”
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “Fascinating. It must have to do with the rover’s energy output. I believe the same thing attracted it to the shield node as well.”
BAXTER: (looking at the soil-core) “Omni, I’m beginning to wonder if the shield was killing it.”
Clarke can’t believe what she’s hearing.
CLARKE: “‘Killing it’?!”
CLARKE: (appalled) “Guys, it’s a rock. A rock that moves. But, it’s still a goddamn rock!”
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “Language, Astronaut Clarke…” (beat) “When the flare passes, you must return to gather more data.”
BAXTER: “I agree. With thousands of colonists landing on this planet, we have to know what’s going on.”
Clarke bristles at the colonists reference. She gets an idea.
CLARKE: “Omni, what would happen if we modified Kyle’s patch to increase power to the shield?”
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “It would cause significant damage to the geoglyph.”
CLARKE: “To the point of its destruction?”
Baxter turns to Clarke, her brow furrowing with concern.
BAXTER: “Where are you going with this?”
CLARKE: “To the node to finish the mission.”
BAXTER: “You can’t!”
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “I have to agree with Engineer Baxter. This is an unprecedented situation. We need time to study–”
CLARKE: (interrupting) “You people seem to keep forgetting, I’m in command here! We’re doing the upload. End of discussion!”
Baxter begins to piece together that something bigger is going on with Clarke. She holds back on disagreeing for now.
BAXTER: “Omni, let us have a private chat.”
CLARKE: “Why?! It won’t change my mind!”
Baxter ignores her and continues speaking with Omni.
BAXTER: “How long will the flare last?”
OMNI: “(COMM VOICE) Four and a half hours.”
BAXTER: “Keep us posted. TerraCat out.”
CLARKE: “I don’t want to discuss this.”
BAXTER: “Calm down. Let’s grab some water.”
Baxter points toward the rear. Clarke reluctantly agrees. They sit.
[Baxter stands and moves to the food dispensery.]
[Baxter accesses the open food dispensary, and pulls out the beverage bulb storage container.]
[Baxter pops the container’s lid and offers it to Clarke.]
[Clarke reluctantly takes a beverage bulb, then Baxter grabs one for herself.]
BAXTER: “Darcy, why are you forcing this? What’s going on?”
[Baxter sits back down, looking at Clarke with concern.]
Clarke looks outside at the alien world, clenching her teeth.
CLARKE: “I’m not at liberty to discuss it.”
Baxter leans in attempting to build trust, consoling her.
BAXTER: “C’mon… Talk to me.”
Clarke coldly rebukes her.
CLARKE: “I can’t. It’s classified.”
Baxter is at her wit’s end! She throws up her hands.
BAXTER: “Classified?! Who am I gonna tell?!’
Clarke stands, grabbing her O2 mask. She points to Baxter’s on the console.
CLARKE: “Better put your mask on.”
BAXTER: “Why?”
CLARKE: “‘Cause I’m goin’ for a walk.”
The discussion is over. Clarke puts on her mask and heads toward the door.
Shaking her head, Baxter has no choice but to reach for her own mask.
EXT. PERSEPHONE, LANDING SITE – NIGHT
The twin stars cast their eerie light on the AeroFox.
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
Niven watches the analysis of the sample on the science station monitor from his couch.
The data set is incomplete.
Niven closes his eyes to think.
He opens them, struggling to pull the auto-doc off.
It falls to the floor once again.
OMNI: “What are you doing?!”
NIVEN (trying to get up): “I heard Clarke. She’s going to restart the node.”
He collapses hard onto the floor.
NIVEN: “Gotta stop her… If she uploads the patch, it’ll spread through the system. We’ll never stop it.”
OMNI: “Kyle, I insist you return to bed!”
NIVEN: “No! Get rid of it. Gimme my bench.”
Niven pulls himself across the floor, dragging his numb legs.
OMNI: “The nano-procedure is only eighteen percent complete. You–”
NIVEN (interrupting): “This is more important, pal.”
Omni gives in to his friend. He removes the bed and deploys a stool and keyboard at the science station for Niven’s task.
Niven reaches the station. With a pained face, he grabs the seat as leverage, hauling himself halfway up.
NIVEN: “The geoglyph isn’t life as we know it… But… It’s alive.”
Niven manages his way into the seat and orients himself.
OMNI: “I agree.”
NIVEN: “We need proof.”
Niven starts tapping on the keyboard.
NIVEN: “It’s made of copper and iridium.”
OMNI: “Same as me. Same as any quantum computer.”
[beat.]
OMNI: “Yet, this one appears to be self- organized. Perhaps even self-aware.”
NIVEN: “And we were planning to build cities out of it.”
OMNI: “Regardless, I seriously doubt Astronaut Clarke will alter her course of action.”
NIVEN: “This is the greatest discovery in the history of science!”
OMNI: “Do you think she cares about that?”
NIVEN: “Actually, yes. She’s a friggin’ astronaut. Of course she cares!”
Niven: (weakening) “But, right now, she’s only thinking about the mission.”
Niven collapses against the station. His gyroscope falls.
OMNI: “Kyle!”
NIVEN: “I… I’m okay.”
Niven pulls himself together with determination.
NIVEN: “Call them back.”
OMNI: “Already on it.”
The ship’s radio crackles to life. Only static is heard.
OMNI: “The flare has jammed communications.”
NIVEN: “Shit.”
OMNI: “According to my calculations, you’re rapidly approaching the point of no return. You have to make a decision.”
NIVEN: (on the verge of tears) “I already have.”
He turns back to the science station to continue his work.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. PERSEPHONE DESERT
[The simmering ball of Proxima hangs in space.]
[The camera shows the roiling texture of the star as it pans closer. Arcs of violent solar flares spin from Proxima.]
[Persephone’s orb resolves from the intense light. Now passing the bulk of the star, the long tongue of a solar flare nearly licks the camera.]
Promixa continues to blast the planet with its flare.
The massive and mysterious geoglyphs bake in the solar flare.
EXT. CRATER – DAY
[From this height, the crater is a tiny pockmark in the vast plain. The geoglyph crusts the horizon.]
[Closer shot of the crater, showing the tiny figure of Baxter close to the parked TerraCat.]
In the crater’s shadow, Baxter has walked many paces away from the TerraCat.
She stands at the edge of the of the shadows cast by the rim of the crater, the soil-core is in her hands. Baxter takes the sample container filled with geoglyph material and slowly edges it into the reddish sunlight.
[Close up of the geophyph sample from Baxter’s point of view.]
The seemingly-inert crystalline material begins to MOVE and EXPAND slightly when exposed to the radioactive glare.
[Baxter watches the alien substance grow with horrified fascination.]
Amazed, she pulls it back into the dark where it immediately REFREEZES, as if it were always a simple, lifeless rock.
[Keeping the soil-core firmly within the shadow, Baxter takes a long look at it before heading back.]
EXT. CRATER
A dejected Clarke sits on top of the TerraCat, staring at the floor of the crater. Baxter walks back from the sunlight.
BAXTER: “It’s only active in sunlight. Which must be why it only on this side of the planet.”
Baxter leans the soil-core against one of the tires.
CLARKE: “This place is so bizarre.”
BAXTER: (leaning back, pained) “Just like Sandra said it would be.”
CLARKE: “Sandra?”
BAXTER: “My wife.”
CLARKE: “I didn’t know you were married.”
BAXTER: “Why would you?”
CLARKE: “Guess I wouldn’t. She on the ship?”
BAXTER: “No. Stayed on Earth.”
CLARKE: “Why?”
BAXTER: “She was afraid of hibernation. Thought she’d never wake up.” (sighs) “The idea freaked her out.”
[Stirring from her perch, Clarke prepares to disembark from the top of the rover.]
Clarke slides down and jumps off the rover.
BAXTER: “And I couldn’t leave my team. The shield was way too important.”
BAXTER: (holding back tears) “If I’m truly honest, I was tired. I didn’t want to put up with anything anymore. Her fears. The Earth. Anything.” (bitter) “We had to say goodbye.”
CLARKE: “That really sucks. I’m sorry.”
BAXTER: “Don’t be. We did what we had to do. She has to be long dead now anyway.” (pulling herself together) “What about you?”
CLARKE: “Me?”
BAXTER: “You must have someone on that ship.”
CLARKE: “No. No time. I have the mission. That’s enough for now.”
[The pair fall silent and Baxter looks away, ruminating on Clarke’s attitude.]
The tone for the radio chimes into their O2 masks. The TerraCat speaks.
TERRACAT: “Attention, Astronaut Clarke. You are receiving an encrypted X-Band transmission.”
CLARKE: (shocked) “I am?!”
BAXTER: “X-band? That can’t be from Omni.”
CLARKE: “No… it can’t.”
[Wasting no further time, Clarke hops into the TerraCat. Baxter grabs the soil-core.]
[Holding the bulky soil-core, Baxter hauls herself into the TerraCat after Clarke. The rover’s doors whoosh closed behind her.]
INT. TERRACAT – MOMENTS LATER
A side monitor in the repressurized passenger section flares to life. Static obscures an incoming message.
Baxter waits as Clarke fiddles with the adjacent instrument panel, inputting a security code. Both women have removed their masks.
The static-filled screen reveals the Colony One mission patch which then jumps to an image of Captain Bova.
BOVA: “Darcy, I hope you’re receiving this. We ‘suped up’ the signal to cut through the radiation.”
Clarke smiles subtly at the sight of her adopted father.
BOVA: “If you’re reading me, you need to know that the, uh… problems… are getting worse. Much worse.”
Baxter glances at Clarke whose demeanor has quickly changed.
BOVA: (ON SCREEN) “We have to push up the timetable. We have days instead of weeks. The Popsicles are thawing as we speak. So, please tell me you got that shield up and running.”
Clarke looks at Baxter in anger. They can’t delay further.
BOVA: “We’ll be nearing orbit by eighteen-thirty hours tomorrow. You should be able to send me a transmission by then. I’ll be in range to receive it.”
BOVA: (smiles sadly) “Love you, peanut.”(determined) “See you soon.”
The transmission ends. Clarke sits in stunned silence. Baxter catches her attention.
BAXTER: “You gonna tell me now?”
CLARKE: (relenting) “Colony One is dying.”
BAXTER: “Since when?!”
CLARKE: “Since we left the Solar System. We took some serious micro-meteor hits in the Oort Cloud.”
BAXTER: “Comets are a bitch.”
CLARKE: “Yeah, well. She’s done.”
Baxter puts a parental hand on Clarke’s shoulder.
BAXTER: “I’m sorry, kiddo. You should have told me.”
CLARKE: (sharply) “Why? I don’t even know you.”
Offended, Baxter withdraws her hand. Before she can respond, Omni’s voice is heard over the radio.
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “AeroFox to TerraCat. Do you read?”
CLARKE: “We’re receiving, AeroFox. If you’re calling about the message from Colony One, I got it.”
OMNI (COMM VOICE): “I’m not. I’m actually calling regarding Kyle.”
BAXTER: “Kyle? What’s wrong?!”
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “He refused treatment and is non-responsive.”
Baxter shares a concerned exchange with Clarke then springs into action.
BAXTER: “We’re on our way.”
Baxter hops into the driver’s seat and powers up systems.
CLARKE: “TerraCat, at current rad-levels, how long until lethal exposure?”
TERRACAT: “Approximately forty-five minutes.”
Baxter (looking at Clarke): “It’ll take nearly hour to get back.”
Fearful, yet determined, Baxter grabs the wheel.
EXT. PERSEPHONE DESERT
The TerraCat exits the crater and enters the blazing red sun.
[The camera pans with the TerraCat as it tears into open desert.]
[The crater’s shadowy indentation rests behind the TerraCat and beneath the glowing orb of Proxima.]
[The TerraCat drives out of frame.]
[The TerraCat drives towards the ominous wall of clouds and darkness that represents the planet’s terminator.]
FADE TO:
INT. TERRACAT
Baxter swerves to avoid a boulder.
Clarke checks their rad-detectors. She closes her eyes after a brief bout of nausea.
CLARKE: “I’m not sure if I’m sick from radiation or your driving.”
BAXTER: “Probably a little of both.”
EXT. PERSEPHONE, MOUNTAINS – NIGHT
Once again, the rover passes through the zone of storms.
Up ahead, the beacon of the AeroFox flashes on the horizon.
[A faint spire of light from the AeroFox spikes up in the distance.]
EXT. PERSEPHONE, LANDING SITE
Lightning flashes overhead and light snow fills the air as the TerraCat circles the AeroFox and screeches to a halt.
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
The airlock opens.
Baxter is the first inside.
She rushes to the aid of Niven who is slumped against the science station.
Baxter places a hand on his head as Clarke closes the hatch. Her touch causes the inert Niven to slump against her arm.
[Clarke is frozen, framed against the hatch.]
CLARKE: “Oh, my God…”
Baxter catches his lifeless body and gently lays it on the floor.
She sits down against the central column and cradles Niven’s torso in her arms.
Clarke takes a knee nearby.
Fighting back tears, Baxter slowly turns to look at Omni.
BAXTER: “What happened?”
OMNI: “He worked until his blood toxicity reached lethal levels.”
OMNI: (remorseful) “I watched him die.”
A seated Baxter holds Niven’s torso, stroking his hair.
BAXTER: “If we only we’d gotten here sooner…”
OMNI: “It wouldn’t have mattered. His life functions had terminated before I contacted you in the crater.”
CLARKE: “Jesus, Omni… You lied to us!”
OMNI: “No. I said he was ‘non-responsive’. Death is a non-responsive state.”
BAXTER: “You violated your programming.”
OMNI: “It was Kyle’s final request to force you to return. I had to honor it. Please don’t be angry with me.”
CLARKE: (folding her arms) “Why?! Why would he sacrifice his life for a bunch of rocks?”
OMNI: “I believe Kyle can explain better than I can. He left you a message.” (sadly) “Do you want to see it?”
Clarke shakes her head. Baxter remains curious.
BAXTER: “I do.”
Niven appears on the screen, above the science station. Pale, shaking and covered in a fevered sweat, he speaks quietly.
NIVEN: (ON MONITOR) “Hey, guys… Guess if you’re watching this, you made it back.”
[Close shot of the screen showing Niven’s final message.]
NIVEN: (ON MONITOR) “And… I’m dead. I hope to hell it was before Darcy could upload that damned patch.”
As Clarke fights back tears, the on-screen image splits.
NIVEN: (ON MONITOR) “I looked at your sample. It could take years to confirm this, but…”
[Baxter’s head is silhouetted in front of an enlarged Niven, sweat beading down his face.]
NIVEN: (ON MONITOR) “Based on my analysis, I truly believe the geoglyph’s alive.”
The screen now shows Niven on the left and data on the right.
NIVEN: (ON MONITOR) “The data indicates a single giant organism.”
An orbital image of the Proxima Pattern appears.
NIVEN: (ON MONITOR) “A living solar cell that occupies the entire sunward atmosphere.” (rubs his eyes) “A vast array evolved to absorb solar flares. Living off of them.”
Still holding Niven, Baxter sees his gyroscope on the floor. She stares at it in sorrow.
NIVEN: (ON MONITOR) “I did this to protect the geoglyph. We need to learn to live with it. We need to–”
[Clarke passes Baxter, who looks up at the movement.]
Clarke stalks forward in anger, slamming a button on the console — cutting off the recording.
[Baxter watches blankly as Clarke silences Niven’s final message.]
[Clarke looks back from the console at Baxter, anger spilling from her gaze.]
She begins pacing.
CLARKE: (to Baxter) “That thing attacked us! Shut down the shield. Crashed our ship!”
BAXTER: “Darcy, we attacked it first.”
OMNI: “Yes. We were basically starving it.”
CLARKE: “Give me a break!”
Baxter gets frustrated at Clarke’s obstinacy.
BAXTER: “Jesus! He died trying to figure this out. Open your damn mind!”
CLARKE: “Don’t talk to me like that. You’re not my mother!”
BAXTER: “I never said I was!”
Clarke pulls herself together, then looks at Omni.
CLARKE: “So, is it pissed at us?”
OMNI: “I doubt it’s that discerning. While it may perceive computers like me as a form of life, humans would be incomprehensible to it.”
CLARKE: “We’re like ants crawling on an elephant compared to this thing.”
OMNI: “A better analogy would be bacteria floating in an ocean.”
BAXTER: “As alien to it as it is to us.”
CLARKE: “What do we do now?
Baxter gently places Niven against the column and stands.
BAXTER: “Give Kyle a decent burial. There’s no way to preserve his body until Colony One arrives.”
Baxter once again ponders the nearby gryoscope.
EXT. PERSEPHONE ORBIT
Seen from space, the geoglyph basks in the light of Proxima.
EXT. PERSEPHONE, LANDING SITE
It’s snowing more heavily than when they first landed.
About thirty meters from the AeroFox, the two women use shovels to toss piles of dirt on the burial mound.
[Clarke rises with shovel in hand.]
[She leans the shovel over her right shoulder.]
As a finishing touch, Baxter kneels, placing Niven’s gyroscope on top.
[Wider shot shows Clarke and Baxter in front of the burial mound, with the vehicles outlined behind them.]
BAXTER: “You want to say anything?”
CLARKE: “This really sucks. What about you?”
BAXTER: “There’s no way we aren’t naming this place Persephone now.”
CLARKE: “I agree.”
BAXTER: “Well… That’s that. We have to get back for rad-treatment.”
They turn and begin walking slowly back toward the ship.
BAXTER: “Less than two days on this planet and we’ve already had to bury someone.”
CLARKE: “We’re going to be burying twenty-thousand in space if we don’t get them down here soon.”
BAXTER: “We have to buy more time. Kyle’s discovery changes everything.”
CLARKE: “Bullshit! We have to focus on the living. That shield is going up.”
BAXTER: “No! I made the shield to save lives not destroy them. Human or not.”
CLARKE: “Baxter, there’s no other planet in this system that can support human life. We’re not giving this one up to some stupid… Rock-thing!”
BAXTER: “Then, maybe we have to live over here on the dark side and leave the other half for the geoglyph.”
CLARKE: “The algae farms and hab modules are all in that hemisphere. It’s not like we can move them over here!”
BAXTER: “We have to figure it out.”
CLARKE: “Screw that! We based the entire plan on using the geoglyph to build up our infrastructure!” (losing her temper) “If its it or us, I choose us!“
Baxter recognizes the standoff is impossible to divert. She pauses a second and tries another tactic.
BAXTER: “I’m not going to argue about this. We should wait until your father arrives and see what he thinks.”
CLARKE: “My father?!”
Clarke tosses down her shovel and gets in Baxter’s face.
CLARKE: “My father and I were forced watch my parents die when they went outside to fix the cryo-tanks after a micro-meter strike.”
Baxter stands her ground as Clarke gets in her face.
CLARKE: “They were killed saving you and the rest of the goddamn Popsicles!
Baxter is saddened, but doesn’t change her position.
BAXTER: “I’m so sorry that happened… But I still can’t let you do it.”
Clarke thinks for a moment.
Without warning, she punches Baxter square in the stomach!
Totally caught off guard, Baxter gasps and collapses on the ground.
Defiant, Clarke turns and stalks toward the TerraCat.
[Clarke leaves Baxter behind in the dust, a determined scowl playing across her face.]
[Aurora blooming overhead, Baxter watches the TerraCat’s door close behind Clarke.]
INT. TERRACAT
[Clarke enters the rover, sitting down in the driver’s seat.]
Clarke activates the self-drive and buckles her seatbelt.
CLARKE: “Take me to Shield Node Two-Twelve.”
TERRACAT: “Destination acquired. Arrival in ninety-seven minutes.”
Cut to – Outside the TerraCat pulls away from the AeroFox.
Baxter suddenly stumbles in front of it, waving her arms.
TERRACAT: “Pedestrian detected.”
The vehicle swerves to avoid Baxter and drives off towards the mountains.
[Beneath the twin stars’ glow, the TerraCat tears up dirt as it changes course away from Baxter.]
Baxter watches Clarke cruise away.
She turns to head back to the Aerofox, clutching her abdomen in pain.
[Baxter walks out of frame, leaving the aurorae to dance in the sky behind her.]
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
[The doors cycle inside the empty AeroFox.]
Baxter opens the hatch and falls to the floor.
OMNI: “What happened?”
BAXTER: “She’s gone…”
OMNI: “She cannot install the patch!”
BAXTER: “There’s no way to stop her.”
The airlock door closes. Baxter props against it.
A schematic of the TerraCat appears on-screen above the science station.
OMNI: “I’m reading that our recon-drone is still connected to the TerraCat.”
BAXTER: “Can you access it?”
EXT. MOUNTAINS
The rover enters the zone of storms. Lightning fills the sky.
INT. TERRACAT
Clarke sits, head in hands. Her eyes closed, lost in thought.
JUMP CUT TO: INT. COLONY ONE, CONTROL
FLASHBACK: The Girl watches the screen as her space-suited parents float above a large tank.
They use tools to weld a seal over the breach. Of the three tanks that were damaged, all but one has been repaired.
Bova looks at her and smiles.
BOVA: “They’re almost done. They’ll be back in time for supper.”
The little Girl is about to breathe a sigh of relief when a bright flash on the monitor catches her eye. The third tank explodes, sending her parents careening away into space!
JUMP BACK TO:
Suddenly, the self-drive system goes offline.
The altered movement catches Clarke’s attention, snapping her out of the terrible memory. She wipes tears from her eyes.
CLARKE: “TerraCat, what’s going on?!”
[The TerraCat reverse along the same path.]
CLARKE: “TerraCat, what’s going on?!”
The vehicle quickly comes to a stop and then reverses course.
Omni’s male voice replaces the feminine TerraCat interface.
OMNI: “I’m bringing you back to the Aerofox. Once you’ve returned, I want you to sit down calmly, take a stress pill, and think things over.”
Clarke is enraged. She looks around the cab.
[Clarke’s POV darts from side to side.]
Spying the drone dock on the roof, she pieces it all together.
CLARKE: “Son-of-a-bitch…”
She unbuckles her safety belt.
[The TerraCat accelerates backwards towards the AeroFox.]
[The rover continues speeding toward the AeroFox.]
[Clarke reaches up to touch a button near the drone tray.]
[The drone tray descends from the ceiling. Clarke spies the drone.]
Reaching the ceiling of the TerraCat, she wraps her fingers around the edge of the drone. After a few seconds of additional fiddling, Clarke grabs hold of it — ripping it out of its slot.
She fumbles for the drone’s power button and hits it hard. The drone goes dead.
Minus a virtual pilot, the TerraCat screeches to a stop!
Clarke loses her grip and is thrown backwards.
[She flies towards camera.]
[Clarke lands on the floor, still clutching the drone.]
She rolls onto her feet and tosses the drone aside.
She then slides back into the driver’s seat.
CLARKE: “TerraCat, manual mode.”
Her chair rotates into the drive position.
[Clarke looks around to orient herself.]
[Clarke taps buttons on a side panel.]
There, she pulls up the map to Node 212 and activates the manual steering.
The TerraCat peels out and heads back toward the mountains.
[The camera view rises, sweeping up from the AeroFox and showing more of the landscape as the TerraCat shrinks.]
[Clarke smiles to herself as she starts to drive.]
[The TerraCat goes forward along the same path.]
[The rover speeds out of frame.]
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
Baxter stands at the science station. She sees the TerraCat heading away on one of the external monitors.
OMNI: “It would appear that Astronaut Clarke disabled the drone.”
BAXTER: “Yeah.”
OMNI: “I’m sorry, Engineer Baxter. I can think of no other way of stopping her. Do you have any ideas?”
Baxter pulls up the ship’s communication system. She tries to calm her voice and appear conciliatory.
BAXTER: “Darcy, this isn’t about the shield! You need to do the rad-therapy or you’re gonna die!”
INT. TERRACAT
BAXTER: (COMM VOICE) “Talk to me, goddamn it!”
Clarke sneers and switches off the radio.
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
With the dead signal, Baxter is at her wits end.
She looks her worst since the mission began. She spies the lavatory.
INT. AEROFOX, LAVATORY
Baxter opens the door to the claustrophobic bathroom. It closes behind her.
She kneels and vomits into the small toilet.
[Baxter heaves forward and vomits into the toilet.]
[Baxter lifts her head, breathing heavily.]
[After several deep breaths, Baxter wipes her mouth on her sleeve.]
She slowly stands, running water into the sink.
Baxter almost begins to cry, but thinks better of it. She splashes water on her face, staring into the mirror.
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
Baxter exits the lavatory.
She looks toward the science station and makes a hesitant request.
BAXTER: “Omni… Could you restart Kyle’s message from where we left off?”
OMNI: “Sure.”
Niven’s sickly image appears on the science station monitor.
NIVEN: “I did this to protect the geoglyph. We need to learn to live with it. We need to resettle on the dark side of Persephone until we can figure this out.”
BAXTER: (under her breath) “That’s exactly what I told her.”
NIVEN: (ON MONITOR) “I know my decision probably doesn’t make sense to you. But, I’m irrelevant in the face of this discovery.”
Niven smiles in the midst of tearing up.
NIVEN: “And honestly… I’ve lived an amazing life. I’m a human… Born between the stars.”
Tears stream down Baxter’s face, matching Niven’s.
NIVEN: “I made it here. Made it to Persephone.”
Weakened from her exposure to Proxima’s radiation, Baxter is increasingly pale. Her emotions mix with the sickness.
NIVEN: “I named this planet… after the goddess of the underworld because it’s the gateway to the unknown.”
NIVEN: (proudly) “The discovery of the geoglyph is just the beginning.”
He flashes a final weak and assuring smile.
NIVEN: “Darcy, try and work with Ms. Baxter. Together, you can find a way to protect the colony… and the geoglyph. Good luck.”
The video ends. Baxter wipes away tears.
She makes a decision [and turns].
BAXTER: “Take me up to the pilot’s station.”
[The camera pulls back to reveal Darcy’s pilot seat descending.]
She hops in and rises to Clarke’s station.
[Baxter lays back as her seat swings up.]
[Shot from above of Baxter as she adjusts to the pilot’s seat. The chair rises.]
[Shot from below the chair as it locks into position.]
Baxter glances with curiosity at a trading card affixed near some gauges.
Baxter glances with curiosity at a trading card affixed near some gauges.
It’s the image of a huge Easter Island statue.
She frowns and pulls up a 3-D model of the planet. It shows her present location.
She spins the globe until it shows the nodes facing the sun-facing side. She locks on Node 22.
BAXTER: “We’re basically trying to hit a bullseye sixty kilometers away.”
Baxter plots a parabola trajectory between the two points on the map. She talks out loud, working through the equations.
BAXTER: “So… How much thrust do we need?”
OMNI: “Excuse me? You can’t possibly be planning a launch. The main engine is inoperative.”
A rotating graphic of the AeroFox appears on-screen.
BAXTER: (resolute) “I’m going to fix it.”
The computer displays a level of dark sarcasm rarely seen.
OMNI: “Yeah, right.”
Baxter is taken aback by his tone, but continues.
BAXTER: “It’s a typical dual-mode propulsion unit. How hard can it be?”
Cut to outside, Baxter — wearing an O2 mask — surveys the insides of an open maintenance access panel near the engines.
[Shot from inside the hatch as Baxter pulls away its panel.]
[Cut back to the Baxter standing next to the now-open hatch.]
Once again, Baxter uses her mask’s Augmented Reality (AR).
OMNI: “You know, a repair of this type typically requires up to thirty –“
BAXTER: (interrupting) “We don’t have ‘thirty’ of whatever you were going to say. If we don’t make it there soon, Clarke is dead.” (scanning the repair) “I’m an engineer, dammit. Machines. Electronics. This is what I do.”
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “Okay. But, regardless, what you don’t do is pilot AeroFoxes.”
BAXTER: “Hey, I fix the ship. You plot the course and fly the us over there.”
Baxter sees that it is damaged in many locations. She marks them with her finger on the AR display.
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “Fine. I’ll try. But, can we please do it after the anti-rad procedure?” (emotional) “I couldn’t bear to lose
Baxter stops her analysis and sighs in frustration.
EXT. PERSEPHONE DESERT – DAY
The rover is back on the sunward side of the planet.
It kicks up dust as it plies the desert in the orange light.
[Shot from behind the TerraCat as it speeds into the plains, star blazing on the horizon above.]
A weary and sleep-deprived Clarke drives with great effort. She spies the node-board she had plugged into the dash panel.
Outside, the TerraCat pulls to a hard stop.
[Shot from below the TerraCat as it idles, engine growling.]
Inside, Clarke ponders the node-board on her left.
JUMP CUT TO:
FLASHBACK: Several hours after the accident that killed her parents, the Girl is back in her quarters. She slowly packs a suitcase with clothing and assorted toys.
In the room as well is Captain Bova. He kneels down in front of her tenderly.
BOVA: “Look at me.”
He lifts the Girl’s chin. She struggles to make eye contact.
BOVA: “Your folks were good friends of mine. What they did today saved a lot of lives. Thousands of people you and I have never met. But, someday, we will. And they’ll have your parents to thank.”
The Girl listens, portraying a wisdom beyond her years.
BOVA: “No matter what, from here on out, you and I are in this together. I’m going to teach you all about the mission. We still have twenty years left in this journey, and I’m going to need your help getting us all there in one piece.” (softly) “Can
The Girl nods, her face filled with maturity.
GIRL: “Yes, I can.”
Back inside the TerraCat, Clarke is more resolute than ever. She realizes now is the best time to implement her plan.
CLARKE: “TerraCat, access the node-board.”
TERRACAT: “Accessing.”
A wave of nausea — the outcome of radiation exposure — hits her hard. She does her best to continue.
CLARKE: “I want you to… I want…”
Clarke can’t hold back.
[She quickly unbuckles her restraints.]
She turns and throws up into the seat well.
[Clarke sits back, getting a grip on herself.]
She coughs and wipes her mouth, pulling it together.
CLARKE: “I want you to recalibrate.”
TERRACAT: “Specify parameters.”
CLARKE: “When it’s reinstalled, the board will access the entire shield grid.”
A screen in front of her shows a map of the towers. Each one that’s operational is nowhere near the patterns of geoglyph.
CLARKE: “Set it to increase output to two hundred percent in every working tower.”
Clarke stares at the horizon, pondering the future.
[She undoes a pocket on the front of her suit.]
She reaches into a pocket on her suit and pulls out a card-sized, dog-eared printout of the Eiffel Tower.
[Closeup shot of the weathered card.]
She looks at it for a moment with emotion, then stuffs it back in her pocket, and punches the steering wheel in anger.
CLARKE: “I’m gonna kill that fucking thing.”
With new resolve, Clarke re-engages the rover’s engine.
EXT. PERSEPHONE DESERT
The TerraCat continues on its previous heading.
INT. AEROFOX
An annoyed Baxter lays on Clarke’s seat — now in bed-mode. The auto-doc is active on her abdomen.
BAXTER: “How much longer?”
OMNI: “Three minutes. I’ve plotted the trajectory to Node Forty-Seven.”
BAXTER: “Perfect.”
LATER. Outside, Baxter works at the access panel.
She grabs a number of nano-paste repair patches from her utility belt.
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “I knew Kyle his entire life.”
BAXTER: “You two were close. I felt it.”
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “He was different. Often bullied as a child. He confided in me.”
Baxter applies patches to the damaged areas, molding them around the tubing by hand.
BAXTER: “We can’t let him die in vain.”
OMNI: “We can’t allow Darcy to die either.”
Baxter nods in agreement.
[Baxter puts the finishing touches on her work. In the distance, Persephone’s crackling terminator storm looms.]
Tapping a button on her wrist, she activates the patches, which fully harden in seconds.
[Close shot of the patches pulling tight.]
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “I’m reading closure.”
Baxter frowns, lost in thought.
[Baxter turns to survey the alien wasteland.]
BAXTER: “Omni, when we were at the node, I saw something. A second source of energy. Could it have been from the geoglyph?”
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “It’s highly likely.”
Baxter jumps down from the heat shield to the ground.
She walks around the ship, giving it a final visual inspection.
BAXTER: “We need more time to figure this all out.”
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “We don’t have it. Clarke will arrive at Node Two-Twelve in less than thirty minutes.”
BAXTER: “Let’s move.”
EXT. PERSEPHONE DESERT
[Persephone’s vast plain stretches as far as the eye can see. From this height, the TerraCat is a mere scuttling ant.]
The TerraCat continues forward. The geoglyph is ahead.
EXT. AEROFOX – MOMENTS LATER
The ship’s side-mounted engines fire, sputter, then fade.
[The test fire continues.]
[The engines peter out, returning the AeroFox to darkness.]
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
Baxter sits at Clarke’s pilot station, scanning the monitors. The display shows the diagram of the engine that flares red.
BAXTER: “That’s only five percent. I’m scared to push it any further.”
OMNI: “I’m afraid we have to.”
A schematic appears showing an arcing path above the planet. Baxter ponders a solution.
BAXTER: “Let’s supplement thrust with the plasma engine.”
The engine diagram changes from red to green.
OMNI: “Done.”
Baxter looks at the ship’s chronometer.
Her hand floats above the main engine button, hesitant to push it.
Unexpectedly, Omni interrupts the tense moment.
OMNI: “Even if you convince Clarke to stop, what’s our ultimate goal?”
BAXTER: (laughs to herself) “I have no idea!”
[Baxter slowly pulls her hand back.]
OMNI: “What if I could prove it’s not only alive, but intelligent?”
BAXTER: “It would be a game-changer. Guess you have until we get there to figure it out.”
OMNI: “Then, let’s get going.”
BAXTER: “Ninety-second burn. Both systems.”
[Baxter presses a button.]
BAXTER: “Firing…”
EXT. AEROFOX
A bright exhaust plume emerges from the side-mounted high thrust engines, and an intermittent blue glow comes from the plasma engine at the base.
A huge cloud of dust and ice is blown away from the landing area as the exhaust strengthens.
Suddenly, the glow dies.
The ship is stuck on the ground!
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT 116 The previous ship schematic glows red once again.
OMNI: “A problem with fuel valve three. Auto-shut-off.”
BAXTER: “Override. Now!”
The song “Tom Sawyer” by Rush suddenly begins to play.
BAXTER: (irritated) “What is that?!”
OMNI: “Sorry. A glitch activated Kyle’s playlist. I’ll shut it down.”
BAXTER: “No, this is actually kinda cool. Plus, I need the distraction. Let it play and get us off the ground!”
EXT. PERSEPHONE, LANDING SITE
The engine restarts.
The AeroFox rises once again.
[Focusing on the gyroscope at Niven’s Grave, the AeroFox pushes upwards.]
The exhaust stabilizes as the ship clears the ground, leaving behind a scorch mark in its wake.
The landing gear retract and pull into the craft.
[Doors close, sealing them off.]
[Panning up, we track the AeroFox.]
[Continuing upwards, the shuttle grows smaller in the twinkling star field.]
[Becoming smaller and smaller, the ship approaches Persephone’s zenith.]
The ship disappears into the sky — becoming yet another star.
EXT. PERSEPHONE DESERT
The TerraCat rolls over the final series of hills that lead to the valley that houses Node 212.
[The TerraCat tears on through the desert.]
INT. TERRACAT
Clarke pushes on.
A huge swath of bright geoglyph material crosses the plain up ahead.
[Camera flies over TerraCat moving ahead quickly]
[Node Tower is seen in the distance as the camera zooms ahead]
[Camera slows to show the node tower]
EXT. PERSEPHONE, LOW ORBIT – DAYSIDE
The AeroFox climbs above the terminator storm, leaving it behind.
It continues upward into the light of Proxima Centauri.
The limb of Persephone spreads to the horizon. The glow of the engine fades as the ship arcs past.
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
Warning klaxons fill the wildly-vibrating cabin. Indicators show engine power is rapidly fading.
[The frame shakes violently.]
OMNI: “Engines down to seventeen percent!”
BAXTER: “Just… Recalculate… Burn them a little longer!”
EXT. AEROFOX
[The engines continue to fire.]
[The AeroFox reaches its zenith.]
The engines continue to fire and then completely fade out.
OMNI: (V.O.) “Burn complete.”
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
Baxter squints in the glow of the red dwarf star. Its photosphere is wracked with sunspots.
BAXTER: “Please, God. Tell me there are no flares coming.”
OMNI: “There are a number of large sunspots pointed in our direction.”
BAXTER: “Great. One minute to deceleration burn.”
A display indicates the ship is ready to descend.
OMNI: “Ready for retro-burn.”
[Baxter sits in silence for a moment]
BAXTER: “Omni, do me a favor and see if you can read Two-Twelve from here.”
OMNI: “I can.”
BAXTER: “Status?”
OMNI: “Still showing it as offline.”
A graphic on Baxter’s monitor shows the status of the node.
EXT. PERSEPHONE, LOW ORBIT
Without forward momentum, the AeroFox falls toward the surface.
[Looking down on the nose of the ship the planet silently passes underneath]
Thrusters fire, reorienting the ship for landing.
[The monopropellant attitude thrusters fire]
[AreoFox reorients for decent]
[Rotation ends]
[AeroFox begins to shrink in view, falling towards the planet.]
[Continues controlled fall]
INT. TERRACAT
Clarke finally arrives at the node. She is visibly disturbed as she drives carefully over the rocky, alien substrate.
EXT. SHIELD NODE, AEROSHELL
[The TerraCat rumbles over the camera.]
The TerraCat slowly approaches the black landing platform.
[Clarke drives up to the Node Tower.]
[The TerraCat slows, approaching the structure.]
This time, Clarke drives up and over the edge to park much closer to the tower and away from the geoglyph material.
INT. TERRACAT
Clarke sits for a second and then removes the node board.
INT. TERRACAT
She rotates her seat back to self-drive position (facing the cabin interior) and grabs her O2 mask.
EXT. PERSEPHONE, UPPER ATMOSPHERE
[The AeroFox speeds past the camera.]
[The ship rapidly grows smaller as it sinks toward Persephone.]
The AeroFox glows in the super-heated gases of re-entry.
EXT. SHIELD NODE, TRANSMITTER
The rover’s door opens and Clarke stumbles out.
She’s rapidly deteriorating from radiation sickness.
She slowly circles the transmitter station.
Arriving at the geoglyph growth, she inspects it in disgust.
Then, with contempt, Clarke shakes her head and returns to the main terminal.
[Clarke circles back to the controls.]
[Above, the AeroFox glows, brightly arcing through the atmosphere.]
She notices green lights indicating the node is still functional.
[Clarke examines the board.]
Clarke finds the slot to replace the node board.
Her hands shake terribly.
She slides the board.
The system lights up and begins a start-up routine. Just then SONIC BOOM resounds high above her!
[Aerofox comes down at the tower.]
Clarke cranes her neck to see the tiny glow of the AeroFox as it descends from orbit.
CLARKE: “You gotta be kiddin’ me…”
INT. AEROFOX COCKPIT
The image of the node on Baxter’s monitor begins to change.
OMNI: “Holy shit! She’s rebooting.”
Baxter is briefly shocked at the swearing computer.
BAXTER: “How long ’til it propagates?”
OMNI: “Thirty seconds.”
Outside the AeroFox fires its soft-landing retro-rockets, slowing for the final time.
[The AeroFox pours on more reverse thrust.]
Baxter is out of options. She looks at the node map and makes a split decision.
Their target landing zone is meters away from the tower. She realigns for the tower itself!
OMNI: “What are you doing?”
BAXTER: “Stopping Clarke without killing her!”
OMNI: “Shouldn’t I deploy the gear?”
BAXTER: “Forget it! No time.”
EXT. SHIELD NODE, TRANSMITTER
Clarke looks back and forth between the rebooting computer and the AeroFox.
Its angle of descent changes.
She’s alarmed as the ship’s retro-rockets cease firing and it falls the remaining few meters.
Clarke rips the computer board out of the system.
[Wide shot of the AeroFox descending towards the shield node.]
[The AeroFox plummets faster, closing to impact.]
It shuts down as she runs for her life.
[Shot from the below the AeroFox as it descends.]
[Clarke pelts forward at full tilt.]
Coming in at an angle, the AeroFox SLAMS into the node at the top on its antenna tower!
[The node’s antenna begins to warp and fracture, sparking with current.]
Clarke trips at the lip of the aeroshell’s impact crater.
Then, with a groan of twisting metal, the damaged antenna collapses in the direction of the passing lander.
[Clarke frantically looks back.]
Mildly stunned on the ground, Clarke turns to watch as the AeroFox continues past the aeroshell, striking the ground.
[The AeroFox fully impacts, slamming into the geoglyph and sliding.]
[The AeroFox slides roughly across the skin of the geoglyph.]
[The AeroFox continues to skid, turning and rolling.]
Shards of geoglyph fly everywhere as the ship slides along the surface, coming to a stop at a steep angle.
INT. AEROFOX, COCKPIT
Baxter stirs from the impact. The cabin is now tilted on its side. Omni’s voice is muffled in the wake of the crash.
[Baxter scans her systems to evaluate the situation.]
BAXTER: “Can you read the tower?”
OMNI: “Yes. Node Two-Twelve is officially… offline.”
BAXTER: “So, where’s Clarke?”
OMNI: “Accessing external cameras.”
On the monitor, various blurry images appear. Finally, one showcases Clarke as she crawls for the board she pulled.
BAXTER: (flabbergasted) “What is she doing?!”
OMNI: “She could take the board and drive to another node for upload.”
BAXTER: (astounded) “Seriously?! Help me down.”
A frustrated Baxter unbuckles her seatbelt and her chair disengages and slides away from the pilot’s station.
EXT. AEROFOX
[In the wake of the crash, the AeroFox lays on its side.]
[Lights near the hatch door blink red.]
The hatch explodes open.
[The hatch clanks to the ground.]
Baxter climbs out of the remains of the ship’s airlock.
[Baxter walks from the sunward side of the craft to face what remains of the transmission tower.]
[Baxter surveys her handiwork.]
Once on the ground, she scans the devastated tower and looks toward Clarke — she’s still crawling and has made it to the board.
[Clarke reaches for the node board.]
Clarke picks it up and stands.
Baxter quickens her pace to a slow jog to catch up.
BAXTER: “Hey!”
Clarke turns to see Baxter and tries to move faster. She staggers toward the rover. Baxter quickly catches up and grabs her by the shoulder.
[Baxter spins Clarke around to face her.]
BAXTER: “Not so fast…”
In spite of her sickly state, Clarke turns with viciousness.
CLARKE: “Get your hands off me! You’re insane! So was Kyle!”
Baxter is taken aback by the harsh sentiment, but continues.
BAXTER: “Maybe I am…. Maybe he was. But, you… You’re done.”
CLARKE: “NO! No, I’m not done!”
CLARKE: (holding up the board) “I’m just gettin’ started!”
Baxter snatches the node board from Clarke.
Baxter breaks the node board in half across her knee!
Enraged, Clarke grabs Baxter and throws them both to the aeroshell.
[Weak from radiation sickness, Clarke does her best to fight with Baxter.]
The women tumble against the base of the node.
Baxter uses this to gain an advantage. She pins the weakened Clarke against the tower.
BAXTER: “Goddamn it! Stop!”
Without warning, before they can continue their tussle, the ground starts shaking!
The nearby geoglyph substrate around the edge of the node’s aeroshell SHIFTS and BUCKLES!
Huge shards of pyrite EXPAND and quickly GROW over the surface. They head for the crashed spacecraft with purpose.
Terrified, the two women cling to the side of the node as rocky tendrils slide past them.
[The massive shard roars past them, almost like a freight train.]
[The crashing tendrils snake towards the AeroFox.]
[Seen from above, the rocky tendrils converge on the AeroFox. The pattern is eerily similar to the geoglyph’s pattern.]
[The geoglyph tendrils race ever-closer.]
It reaches the AeroFox and encompasses it like a giant metallic hand.
[The force of the crystal columns lift the ship up and into the air.]
[The columns continue to grow, pushing the ship higher.]
Then, as quickly as it all began, the growth comes to a complete halt. It solidifies around the ship as amber segments that glow, translucent in the red sunlight.
Baxter slowly stands.
[Seen from Baxter’s POV.]
She stares at the elaborate new formation. It has an organic, yet mathematical order to it — similar to the patterns seen from orbit.
BAXTER: “Omni, are you there? Omni?”
Silence abounds.
Only the wind can be heard as Baxter extends a hand to Clarke. The young woman takes it, standing shakily.
[Clarke is clearly traumatized by the event.]
CLARKE: “It’s eating the ship!”
Baxter puts up a hand, silencing Clarke.
BAXTER: “Shush!” (turns back to AeroFox) “Omni… Please come in.”
Omni’s voice breaks the silence, startling them.
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “I’m here.”
BAXTER: “Are you alright?”
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “Yes. You said I should figure it out, so… I figured it out.”
[Baxter and Clarke look on in awe.]
Increasingly freaked out, Clarke staggers away from the spectacular display toward the direction of the TerraCat. She clearly wants to get away from the alien material.
Baxter continues her observation of the new crystal structure.
BAXTER: “This is amazing. What did you do?”
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “I sent an E-M-P of my own.”
BAXTER: “You poked it.”
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “Yes. And, apparently… this formation is the result.”
Excited, Baxter walks along the aeroshell examining the lines of geoglyph which lead to the AeroFox.
BAXTER: “Are you able to talk to it?”
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “I can’t per se. I do, however, detect a pattern.”
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “It’s indecipherable, yet appears to have complex organization.” (urgently) “I want to try something. Would you come closer?”
BAXTER: “Um… Sure?”
A woozy Clarke can hardly believe it as an unafraid Baxter steps off the aeroshell and heads quickly to the perimeter of the fresh pyrite supporting the AeroFox.
CLARKE: “Wait..!”
Baxter arrives the base of the geoglyph structure. Above her, the AeroFox is suspended by amber columns of growth.
BAXTER: “I’m here. Now what?”
Baxter appears stronger as she jogs toward the elevated ship.
OMNI: “It knows that I exist. I think there might be a way to have it understand that you do as well.”
OMNI: “Step closer. I’m going to send a series of more complex pulses.”
Baxter nears the growth of geoglyph encompassing the AeroFox.
OMNI: “Put your hand out.”
A column of fresh pyrite GROWS toward Baxter, stopping about waist-high. From a distance, Clarke watches in horror. Clarke watches from a distance in horror.
CLARKE: “Are you crazy?! Baxter, don’t!”
Baxter ignores her, slowly extending her left hand.
Alarmed, the delirious Clarke begins stumbling in Baxter’s direction to stop her.
As Clarke covers the distance between the Node and the crashed AeroFox, Baxter touches the column!
Almost magically, Baxter’s hand sinks into the structure.
Her breath quickens. A loud RUMBLE emanates from the tendril of geoglyph behind the AeroFox.
Clarke is speechless as she watches the geoglyph quickly forge an enormous humanoid form!
The BAXTER-GLYPH emerges, towering above them, casting a long shadow in the orange light.
Baxter pulls her hand away, staring up, mouth agape.
BAXTER: “Oh my, god. It’s me…”
The huge replica of Baxter mirrors her stance at the rocky interface. Geometrical shapes imitate her body in detail.
BAXTER: “Omni. How… How big is that thing?”
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “Twenty-one meters high.”
The Baxter-glyph stops growing. It stands tall with its massive left hand extended, approximating Baxter’s previous stance. It appears to be reaching for them.
Stumbling forward and suddenly less afraid, Clarke wants answers.
CLARKE: “Why… Why is it doing that?”
BAXTER: “It’s telling us, “Darcy, stop trying to kill me…”
Clarke smiles and laughs for the first time in a long while.
OMNI: “I believe the manifestation is part of its analysis of you, Engineer Baxter. A way of understanding your existence within its own context.”
Baxter’s eyes widen in amazement. Her heart races.
Clarke takes in the astounding sight as well, staring in awe.
BAXTER: “How does it even know I’m here?”
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “Like all living things, you have an electro-magnetic signature. I simply made the geoglyph aware of your frequency.”
CLARKE: “So, it made a huge statue of you. If it could do that all along, why didn’t it just crush our shield?!”
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “That’s not how it thinks. It’s been alone for billions of years. It was trying to gather information to ascertain what was happening to it.”
BAXTER: “Remember, only the nodes that landed on it were non-functional. It couldn’t reach the others.”
The image of the enormous Baxter-glyph triggers a final memory in Clarke.
She hears her mother’s voice.
MOTHER: (V.O.) “We’re out here to do two things: preserve life and make a new one.” (beat)
“I care about them. I care about you. Every life is important.”
Clarke nods. She finally connects the dots. Returning to reality, she locks eyes with a concerned Baxter.
CLARKE: “So, what do we do now?”
Baxter turns away from the giant statue and observes Clarke.
BAXTER: “Child… You’re a mess. We gotta get you that rad-treatment.”
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “Plus, another flare is imminent.”
BAXTER: “Ugh…”
OMNI: (COMM VOICE) “I suggest you re-enter the AeroFox, grab the auto-doc and supplies, then head back to that crater.”
Clarke can barely stand, yet she seems worried for Omni.
CLARKE: “Omni, what are you going to do?”
OMNI: “I will continue the conversation. We appear to be making… progress.”
Baxter gestures toward the TerraCat and nods warmly.
BAXTER: “See you in a sec.”
Clarke nods and turns. She stops for a second to stare up at the Baxter-glyph.
Meanwhile, Baxter observes the elevated AeroFox. Its hatch is now several meters above the ground.
BAXTER: “Omni, I don’t suppose you could talk your new buddy here into making me some stairs?”
OMNI: “That would be a bit beyond our current ability to communicate.”
BAXTER: “Hmph… Figures.”
She stalks around the geoglyph structure to access the airlock, disappearing behind the structures.
INT. TERRACAT
Clarke enters through the open hatch.
She slumps in one of the rear seats.
She looks at the chronometer on her wrist. It reads 19:14 hours.
She cocks her head to the rover’s ceiling.
CLARKE: “TerraCat. Colony One is out there somewhere. Pinpoint its beacon.”
TERRACAT: “Acknowledged. Searching…”
Clarke struggles to maintain consciousness.
TERRACAT: “Colony One Beacon located. Transmission delay: twelve minutes.”
CLARKE: “Okay. Send the following message…” (coughing) “Dad, it’s me.”
Baxter is seen approaching in the distance, lugging supplies.
CLARKE: “It’s a long story. We crashed. We lost Kyle… But, Baxter and I… We’re okay. Yeah… We’re okay.”
Baxter enters. She dumps a load of supplies on the forward passenger seat and shuts the hatch behind her.
She looks through the front windshield at the Baxter-glyph.
CLARKE: “We found something. Something that changes everything. When you reach orbit, I need you to come down here. Bring along a science team.”
BAXTER: “Sure. As long as you don’t punch me again.” (wry smile) “Because next time, I punch back.”
Clarke smiles weakly and nods, understanding.
CLARKE: “And I’ll deserve it.”
CLARKE: “Let’s rendezvous at Shield Node Two-Twelve. There’s something here you have to see. And then, we have some
serious decisions to make. See you soon.” (slightly teary) “And Dad… I love you.”
CLARKE (to the TerraCat): “End of message.”
[Closeup of Baxter looking at Clarke as she near the steps, about to enter the TerraCat.]
[Close on an annoyed Clarke who puts her hand up as if to say “I’m on the phone”.]
[Behind Clarke, Baxter finishes stowing the last of the equipment.]
[Baxter presses a button next to the rover’s doorframe, sealing the hatch.]
The rover pressurizes. Both women remove their oxygen masks.
[A low shot shows Baxter as she kneels, pulling off her helmet. Still seated, Clarke does the same.]
[Baxter removes the auto-doc from her back.]
BAXTER: “Open your suit, kiddo. We’ll get you fixed up.”
Baxter takes the auto-doc and places it on Clarke’s torso. Then she taps a few buttons and speaks to the device.
BAXTER: “Begin broad-spectrum radiation therapy.”
The auto-doc lights up as its arms emerge and administer a round of nano-machines. It speaks back.
AUTODOC: “Therapy initiated.”
Clarke observes at Baxter, clearly feeling guilty.
CLARKE: “So… Are we cool?”
BAXTER: “Sure. As long as you don’t punch me again.” (wry smile) “Because next time, I punch back.”
Clarke smiles weakly and nods, understanding.
CLARKE: “And I’ll deserve it.”
[Baxter walks over to her seat.]
Baxter sits in the driver’s seat and rotates into position. She grabs the steering wheel and powers up the vehicle.
BAXTER: “I hope I can find that damn crater again. I was driving like a maniac.”
Clarke thumbs the comm button.
CLARKE: “Omni, are you reading me?”
Baxter ceases her driving prep and turns quizzically.
OMNI (COMM VOICE): “Roger that. Go ahead.”
CLARKE: “Do you have access to Kyle’s playlist?”
[Baxter glances back at Clarke, a grin teasing the edge of her lips.]
OMNI (COMM VOICE): “Affirmative. Would you like to hear something? I could pipe it through.”
CLARKE: “Sure.” (leaning back) “Surprise us.”
The song “Under The Milky Way” by The Church begins playing. Baxter smiles and places the vehicle in gear.
EXT. SHIELD NODE, AEROSHELL
[The TerraCat turns on the Shield Node platform.]
The TerraCat peels out, leaving behind the Node. The huge Baxter-glyph towers above it all as the women drive away.
[The TerraCat continues its journey.]
[The camera rises as the TerraCat rushes away.]
[The AeroFox slides out of frame as camera movement continues.]
[The TerraCat is a dot near the horizon.]
DISSOLVE TO:
INT. COLONY ONE, COMMAND CENTER
The smiling and relieved crew observes the glowing disc of Persephone on various monitors.
Captain Bova slowly rises from his seat.
A tear streams down his cheek as he stares at the planet below, the geoglyph emblazoned across its face.
After fifty long, painful years, he’s finally home.
EXT. SPACE
In orbit above the planet, Colony One has arrived. Their odyssey is over, yet the future remains unknown.
[Colony One continues above the planet.]
FADE TO BLACK
THE END
[Camera pans to right to Clarke]
OMNI (COMM VOICE): “We don’t have it. Clarke will arrive at Node Two-Twelve in less than thirty minutes.”